Dont panic it was brilliant! i loved the way severus dealt with harry, he needs stability and discipline to help him control his temper (though i do love a tantrum-ing harry! lol) well written : )
| Title: To the Infirmary
| 17 Jan 2009 1:17 am
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| Reviewer: maha q8 (Anonymous)
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i'm kindda fraid to read the rest
i want harry to be a boy in the next chapter coz i think it's agood story but i'm not sure if i want to read the rest if he is still a dog
iread the rest now and see
great chapter . update soon i was so excited to see this chapter up =]
Thats a funny story, I realy like it. Please update soon, thank you.
Ahh I love it! I came accross this earlier today and was almost put off by the creature fic warning (not my thing really!) but im really glad that I have read it, I was expecting Harry to be like permenantly changed and am glad he's not, Harry is so cute as a 5 year old, I dont think he cries too much either, like you say the poor lad has been through quite a bit and is bound to be feeling emotional especially seeing as he cant really work out his teenage thoughts in his child mind. I hope you can update soon, im adding this to my tracked stories list : )
Awwww, this is so cute! I love Puppy Harry! And i love how Draco took him out, and then his adventure, but then he was just scared at the end. Very entertaining. I was worried when Filch and his cat almost got him, but i am so relieved that he got away and that Snape found him. Hooray! Good job on this story so far! Thank you so much for sharing it! :)
| Title: Problems in Class
| 18 Dec 2008 6:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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I really like this story. I feel sorry for Harry getting a spanking when he was so scared because of Mrs. Norris and Filch, but he did deserve it for running away. I hope he isn't in too much trouble. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Yeowch! He shall learn, though. I think you are portraying a five-year old perfectly. Haha, Snape-- so stern, in denial, and....*whispers* cute!
I don't want to end up as potions ingredients. Tata.
| Title: Problems in Class
| 18 Dec 2008 2:17 am
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| Reviewer: Me! (Anonymous)
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I really liked this chap! It was great!
I think you are doing a wonderful job describing 5 year old Harry. Little kids use to cry a lot, maybe not too much, but this is understandable...and specially after a spanking. Also Harry is still getting used to his five year old self...too many changes in a too short time! It seems that Harry learned a news paper DO hurts. I wonder how much more will Harry have to learn?
It was so cute that Harry wanted to be cuddled by Snape! And Snape relented! Without knowing of course...
Oh, i do hope Harry gets back to Mrs. Norris! Oh...a puppy can do many things ot a cat while said cat is not looking out, such as spilling her milk, or biting her or....mmmm, many other things.
Is Snape planing on naming Harry something else while being in pup form? calling him Mr. Potter is not very good for his hiding identity...lol
Ok, now please DO try to update soon! I know Chrismtas is VERY close and this is hectic for everyone but I would like to read the discussion!
Ok, I let you go back to your writting! Update soon!
Bye!
From Me!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm sure Harry will get back at Mrs. Norris. Snape will give Harry a pet name but I'm still thinking about it. I'll try to update as soon as possible but it really will take some time. I'm traveling for Christmas in a couple of days and I don't know if I can take my labtop. Keep your fingers crossed that I can. Thanks for reviewing!
i love this story it is sooo CUTE ! I cant wait until the next chapter
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