|
Reviews For Like My Father
Aw he sounds so cute thought. Nicely written and I'm enjoying the way you delve into the characters thoughts. update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, I really hope to finish. It's not really in sight now, I still have a lot of ideas to where this story could go. I'll try my best.
Off to read the next chapter
Author's Response: Sorry to tell you but I love those kind of stories. My story is pretty much coming to me 3 pages a night. Right now in my mind I think he may only live with them through the holidays but not beyond. I really haven't decided yet.
Regarding your Latin, I would suggest changing it to "Formae Primae rede!" which means "Return to your first form!" Your internet translation translated the word "original" as a noun instead of an adjective, and the translation it gave you is actually "I show I am your copy looks." Please don't take this as a complaint, I'm a Latin major at college and admit I'm a geek about it. If you want any other spells translated in the future, you can message me and I'll gladly provide you with the translation. Again, this is a wonderful story and I'm definitely looking forward to more of it. Cheers! Author's Response: Yeah, sorry. I know very little Latin. I'll probably use your suggestion when I edit the first chapters eventually. For sure, I'll ask you if I need anymore translations. Thanks!
|
Powered by eFiction 3.5 |