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Reviews For Like My Father
Title: Problems in Class 17 Dec 2008 7:13 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    It's very sweet - I like Harry's idea that he has to teach Snape how to be nice! Please write more soon!
Title: Problems in Class 17 Dec 2008 5:22 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that chapter was highly amusing, espescially harry getting away from malfoy and getting the upperpaw on filch, harry is certainly going to enjoy eating the meal
Title: Problems in Class 17 Dec 2008 3:20 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that is too funny. Snape spanking the pup! Naughty Harry!

    Aw he sounds so cute thought.

    Nicely written and I'm enjoying the way you delve into the characters thoughts.

    update soon!
Title: The Rules 11 Dec 2008 9:04 am
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like where this is going. I really hope you continue, because your off to a great start. you have me hooked.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I really hope to finish. It's not really in sight now, I still have a lot of ideas to where this story could go. I'll try my best.

Title: Waking Up 09 Dec 2008 4:03 pm
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]
    How cute was Harry as a puppy? I stumbled across this story and thought I would give it a try and I'm not at all disappointed.

    Off to read the next chapter
Title: The Rules 08 Dec 2008 6:41 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i love your story.but almost snape is harry' father stories draco come and live with snape and harry.please you dont do this.

    Author's Response: Sorry to tell you but I love those kind of stories. My story is pretty much coming to me 3 pages a night. Right now in my mind I think he may only live with them through the holidays but not beyond. I really haven't decided yet.  
Title: The Rules 08 Dec 2008 4:32 am
Reviewer: Glamorbaby2011 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story I think the relationship between sev and harry is cute. Update sooonnnn =]
Title: The Rules 08 Dec 2008 3:45 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    good chapter. Keep it up.
Title: A Proposition & A Rescue 29 Nov 2008 8:54 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good chapter. I like it that you are giving us Severus' internal musings and reactions. I also like the way Poppy bullied Dumbledore itn otaking his medicine and finding out that was the reason for him eating all those lemon drops ((hmmm, if the potion was made more palatable Albus probably wouldn't have all those lemon drops around that he keeps offering everyone--it would certainly be an incentive to Severus to take it up as a project, I would think!).

    Regarding your Latin, I would suggest changing it to "Formae Primae rede!" which means "Return to your first form!" Your internet translation translated the word "original" as a noun instead of an adjective, and the translation it gave you is actually "I show I am your copy looks." Please don't take this as a complaint, I'm a Latin major at college and admit I'm a geek about it. If you want any other spells translated in the future, you can message me and I'll gladly provide you with the translation.

    Again, this is a wonderful story and I'm definitely looking forward to more of it.

    Cheers!

    Author's Response: Yeah, sorry. I know very little Latin. I'll probably use your suggestion when I edit the first chapters eventually. For sure, I'll ask you if I need anymore translations. Thanks!
Title: A Proposition & A Rescue 29 Nov 2008 7:47 pm
Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful story.I especially like Severus' thoughts,(my kind of houmor).

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