| Title: A Proposition & A Rescue
| 29 Nov 2008 5:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, Snape is hooked. Harry sounds so adorable in his little form. It must be frustrating for Harry to have his fifteen-year-old.
Nice story, original too. Please update soon.
I'm completely enjoying this. Thanks for sharing your story with us :-)
| Title: Waking Up
| 28 Nov 2008 9:04 pm
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| Reviewer: ReginaCaeli (Anonymous)
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I am really enjoying this story,Great Job!!
Love the way this story is going. I would watch your points of view a little bit with the second chapter and the first. You switch from one perspective to another and it makes the flow a bit harder to follow. Other than that, I love this and I'm eager to read more. Keep going, buddy.
| Title: Waking Up
| 28 Nov 2008 3:33 am
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| Reviewer: Me (Anonymous)
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I do hope you update soon. i can't wait to see how Snape deals with a 5 year old Potter. Just hope you don't make him a total angel but also not a total demon. Update soon!
| Title: Waking Up
| 25 Nov 2008 10:58 am
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| Reviewer: caro (Anonymous)
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Just loving this fic! De-aging Harry is always cute but now there's added puppy!!
lol. Of course its already forming in Dumbledores mind. I don so much enjoy this
Hmmmm..........This is certainly interesting. I look forward to reading more
| Title: Waking Up
| 25 Nov 2008 3:50 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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You will need to change the word telescope to microscope.
good chapter keep it up The story plot is good.
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