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Title: Chapter 16 20 Jul 2014 1:38 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus did an impressive job with Lily's birthday. Something the three of them could enjoy. The park to tire out Harry followed by a romantic dinner for himself and Lily. The faculty will be impressed when they hear about it. One little comment. You wrote that Severus stocked down the halls. The word you want is stalked. Might just be a typo but thought I would mention it.
Title: Chapter 16 18 Jul 2014 5:53 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow!!

    Este fue un hermoso capítulo, como siempre me han enamorado los pequeños detalles que has puesto,

    como lo de Severus llevando a caballito a Harry, y lo del baño,

    la forma de Harry de saludar a Severus al llegar a casa, lo doméstico y dulce que suena todo,

    y por supuesto,

    no hay duda que la cena romántica y plan de cumpleaños es sencillamente precioso

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