Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 17 20 Jul 2014 11:54 pm
Reviewer: Jessi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi there! I am loving this story so much. It's very original and lovely. However, it's getting difficult to read because there are quite a few grammatical and sentence structure mistakes. I didn't want to come off as insulting but the past two chapters have not been up to par as the rest of this story. I may not have beta'd but if you need another person to look at your chapters I would be available. I can't wait for more!
Title: Chapter 17 20 Jul 2014 1:48 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Severus told Lily a brief version of what happened at the hearing. I know that I was wondering. Having Snape read Sense and Sensibility to Lily was a funny idea. Can't have too much Rickman.
Title: Chapter 17 20 Jul 2014 12:50 am
Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow!!!

    yo no había pensado en el papel de espía de Severus,

    que emoción!!!!!!!!

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