| Title: Chapter 23
| 21 Feb 2017 8:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the cake incident thank you
That went better than I expected, especially after Petunia's crack about "that boy from Spinner's End." Lily must have really wanted to make up with Petunia to not fire back after that one. At least Lily had the satisfaction of listening to Petunia admit that Snape was a better father than she expected. I had to laugh at Vernon and Arthur discussing drills. What a quandary for Vernon.
Author's Response: Lily really did want to make up with Petunia. (In the books, I think Lily would have tried to make up with Petunia the rest of her life.) Her she can address the problem face to face. No, it will never be prefect, but at least they're talking again. Lily would miss her sister, even if she is occationally unpleasent. Glad you liked the bit with Vernon and Arthur. It was one of my favorite little inserts.
| Title: Chapter 23
| 23 Sep 2014 10:44 am
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| Reviewer: snarry fan (Anonymous)
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Thanks for update.....
Its great
Author's Response: Thanks.
| Title: Chapter 23
| 23 Sep 2014 5:56 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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good chapter!!!
I love the iteraction between characters
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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