Wonderful story, thank you.
oh my GoD my heart hurts this is beautiful
Title: Once Upon A Time
| 19 Sep 2020 9:30 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Brilliant ending thank you, I’m so glad I was able to read this in one sitting
It's 1 in the morning, I don't know why I'm up, but I just finished this and now I'm sobbing.
OUCH.
I love the way you wrote this with all these details that crashed together and clicked like puzzle pieces. The format fits so well, kind of giving off that 'let me tell you a bedtime story' vibe. Great job. :)
Title: Once Upon A Time
| 30 Aug 2015 11:53 am
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Reviewer: anna (Anonymous)
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Title: Once Upon A Time
| 27 May 2014 4:55 am
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Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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This story made me choke up. Amazing job. Thank you.
Well done! You broke me, but well and truly, done! Congratulations and THANK YOU!
Title: Once Upon A Time
| 20 Jun 2011 5:21 am
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Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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wow. sad story, but powerful and well styled. thank you
A lovely, if sad, story. Very well written. Thanks for taking the time to finish it.
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