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Reviews For Rainbow Of Grey
Title: Child 04 Feb 2022 12:22 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Sweet and insightful
Title: Child 19 Sep 2020 8:50 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love your style of writing thank you
Title: Child 18 Feb 2009 4:33 pm
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    Try starting sentences differently. A lot of them start with He. I liked Harry watching Snape, I imagine he would look like a hawk with those dark eyes. Good chapter! Thanks for posting!
Title: Child 11 Feb 2009 10:40 pm
Reviewer: Potterworm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I didn't realize you were planning to continue this. I'm so glad I caught sight of chapter 2, as I enjoyed it very much. Once again, I love the whimical tone to it.

    Author's Response: Thanks! It seems to be how I write. Which is nice! It's nice to have a style. :)
Title: Child 11 Feb 2009 7:01 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I loved that part so much even in Canon, when Harry's eyes grew wide at all the food that appeared at the opening feast!

    Nice beginning, I'm looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. I thought it was sweet too.

    The next chapter should be up soon. Promise.


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