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Title: Taking You Home 10 Jun 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay, I was tearing up there at the end. I almost had to get the Kleneex. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more of this.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
Title: Taking You Home 28 Mar 2009 4:01 pm
Reviewer: Liouba (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hiiii! ^^ hey, nice one! I love your story! please please update!!!!!!!!! lol

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Taking You Home 15 Jan 2009 11:04 pm
Reviewer: Ichigo Mirai (Signed) [Report This]
    this is really good!
Title: Taking You Home 15 Jan 2009 11:02 pm
Reviewer: Ichigo Mirai (Signed) [Report This]
    this is really good!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Taking You Home 05 Dec 2008 6:05 am
Reviewer: Leilia Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow.
    Great job. I can't wait to see what happens next for Severus and little Alexia.

    Leilia

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I very happy people are enjoying this story. I'll try to update soon.

    Nightshade

Title: Taking You Home 05 Dec 2008 2:38 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved this story. I thinks a little girl could wrap severus around her finger even if he is grumpy.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I'm hoping to make Alexia the type of girl who can wrap anyone around her finger. But I also want to try and keep Severus somewhat in character. At least for a little while, LOL! Thanks again for your review, they make me happy!

    Nightshade:)

Title: Taking You Home 02 Dec 2008 5:56 pm
Reviewer: Serenity Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVE IT!!!! Please update soon!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to update soon.
Title: Taking You Home 01 Dec 2008 5:38 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    snape is very colhheart.i learn alexia is abused but still he doesnt want her.hwhat a good father.i hope now he doesnt feeling hurt poor girl.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Taking You Home 01 Dec 2008 5:21 pm
Reviewer: Cait (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's fairly good... Some of your grammer/word choice is off- for example, saying "not knowing her life was about to change forever" and then saying "not knowing that his life was about to change forever" a paragraph later sounds funny... It's a bit repetitive, too. That kind of dramatic irony only needs to be stated once... Do you have a beta? I noticed spelling mistakes a beta prob would have picked up on- like saying none instead of known... if you don't have a beta I'm willing to be one... It's a good story and you're a good writer, it just needs a bit of tweaking here and there to make it supurb. Anyway, if you want me as a beta, PM writeurlife (it won't let me log on at school)... ~Cait

    Author's Response:

     Thank you for volunteering to be my beta, as you most likely noticed I don't have one. However i'm sorry to say the reason I don't have one is because I'm not exactly sure how the whole thing works. Could you please explain it to me?

    And thank you for your review!

    Nightshade:)

Title: Taking You Home 01 Dec 2008 1:11 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Keep it going.

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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