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Title: Chapter 1 06 Dec 2020 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Somehow I have missed this story it is so good with a brilliant start than you
Title: Chapter 1 16 Nov 2009 7:51 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    It's been a while since I've been at this site, so I don't remember if I've already reviewed this or not. But I really like your setup here, and I'm glad the story's a completed one--so here I go!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 07 Dec 2008 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Just_A_Rader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow, love this after-life scene of Severus, and the reasons you gave for them. I think it's incredibly hard to get a truly intriguing first chapter...you managed it and very well so. XD

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm glad you think so!
Title: Chapter 1 06 Dec 2008 9:29 pm
Reviewer: ImUpToNoGood (Signed) [Report This]
    This looks fascinating! Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on SC during the week, but I'm planning to work on this one again next weekend.
Title: Chapter 1 06 Dec 2008 4:03 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    OH, I think I could like this story of yours. I like the Cinema idea--even better than the train station. And, of course, Albus is here to. Always the guide/meddler-coaxing those he "loves" in the direction he needs them to go.

    Oh, you killed of Ron AND Hermionie. No-- this is not going to start as a happy little fic is it? Well, you will have to do a lot of work to patch up our boys--get to it and i'll keep on reading.

    Looking forward to your next update.
    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Glad you liked the cinema idea...I believe I may have seen it in a movie or perhaps read about it somewhere, but I can't remember for sure.  Yeah, it was terrible to kill off Harry's best friends, but their deaths are really a major part of why Severus decided to go back for Harry.  And yeah, it is going to be pretty angsty, I think, but I will do my best to have it end hopefully.
Title: Chapter 1 05 Dec 2008 4:11 pm
Reviewer: ivanoma (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The things you worry about never come to pass?
    No, it's the unexpected that always bites you in the [[[[rear,]]]] or in his case, in the neck,
    Are you SURE you can't make this rhyme?

    Author's Response: LOL!  Hi, Ivanova!  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 05 Dec 2008 3:57 pm
Reviewer: Kazza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh what a great start! And a redemption for Severus too. You have me intrigued to see where you'll be leading your readers...

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 05 Dec 2008 8:33 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh...what a lovely beginning. I look forward to the next chapters. A "10" for you, my dear.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 1 05 Dec 2008 12:02 am
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is a very promising 1st chapter! Poor Harry, I can't imagine him without his friends... I hope Snape will be able to help.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I can't really imagine Harry without his friends either.  It was a hard decision to have them die, even in this short little fic.  I decided to have it be that way mostly because if they were alive, the Weasleys and Hermione would just about have to be included in the story...no way they wouldn't be around Harry at Christmas time, and I really just wanted to write about Harry and Severus.  There is also the fact that Hermione and Ron's deaths are a big part of the reason Severus decided to go back for Harry's sake.  After acknowledging that he had abused Harry and was partially responsible for his pain, Severus couldn't just 'abandon' Harry knowing that he would be truly alone without his friends.  
Title: Chapter 1 04 Dec 2008 10:58 pm
Reviewer: guignou (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this beginning is awesome :) i'm looking forward to reading you !
    thanks !

    Author's Response: Thank you!

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