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Title: Chapter 3 06 Dec 2020 10:07 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lump in the throat for this chapter, thank you
Title: Chapter 3 22 Sep 2011 4:44 am
Reviewer: topeswin (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3 16 Nov 2009 8:01 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, God, this chapter made me weep. What painful, beautiful writing. Thank you.

    Author's Response: Thank you; yeah, this story was pretty sad and angsty, actually.
Title: Chapter 3 23 Dec 2008 6:51 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! it's so sad that Hermione and Ron are dead, but he still has very good friends : I liked how you characteried Neville, and I hope we will see him in the following chapters.
    I also liked that Hermione and Ron warned Harry that Snape was coming; it goes well with the begining and Snape and Dumbledore's conversation.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Neville and Luna are really good friends, too, and Hagrid, and now Harry also have Severus on his side, of course, so he isn't alone.  I had Harry dream about Ron and Hermione telling him that Sev was coming because I hoped it would smooth the way and maybe make it a little more believable that they could learn to get along more quickly.  This 'little' story has already turned out to be more than I'd planned, lol, and I can't write a long, drawn-out piece where they're slowly learning to care for one another.  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 3 23 Dec 2008 5:45 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    AAAWWWWWW!!!!!! So sad, and so cute!!! Aw, you've got me crying Kristeh! I love this story, it's so swweeet. Oh, but you killed the weasleys AND ron and Hermione? How could you?! Poor harry, poor baby...

    lol, i'll stop now. But I just wanted to say how much I love this story. Sev is so....Sevish, but in a really sweet way, if you know what I mean. (lol. not good at explaining myself, if you didn't already know).

    Well, ok, bye!

    -Elise

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you, Elise!  Well, it was the fact that all of Harry's closest friends were gone that really inspired Severus to come back, so that Harry wouldn't be all alone.  Glad you like Sev...I wondered if he would be really OOC, but I kind of had to move the story along quickly and didn't have time to write 10 chapters with Severus slowly coming around.  I suppose I can just say his afterlife experience had a big effect on him, lol.
Title: Chapter 3 22 Dec 2008 9:09 pm
Reviewer: guignou (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG such a beautiful chapter ! i was about to cry for the last sentences ! thank you so much !

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!
Title: Chapter 3 22 Dec 2008 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! I'm at work and I have tears in my eyes. That was so beautiful!

    Ok....where are those kleenexes?:(

    I hope that Sev takes good care of Harry!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, I think Sev will throw himself heart and soul into his new 'mission'.  He seems like an all or nothing kind of person to me, lol.  
Title: Chapter 3 22 Dec 2008 2:47 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Sniffing now.

    I love Neville. He grew into a fine man. If JKR had killed him in her bloodbath, I think there would have been a scream throughout the HP world.

    I was unaware that almost all the Wesleys were dead. Was it Bill or Charley that survived? Poor boy, he is probably in the same shape as Harry.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I've always loved Neville...yep, I'm so glad he survived, though I suppose this story is much more of a bloodbath, considering all the people I've had die!  Charlie survived...yeah, I probably should have let Bill live, too, just so there'd still be one other Weasley around.  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 3 22 Dec 2008 11:18 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for Neville! Mila

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I've always liked Neville, too.

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