| Title: Chapter 6
| 01 Jan 2009 11:01 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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A very fluffy ending, but it really goes well with the season!
Oh, that was so good! I'm glad you brought Ron and Hermione back into this--I loved how they saved Harry. I'm also glad that Tobias and Sev are going to give things another shot. Great fic--I enjoyed it.
-P.G.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 31 Dec 2008 3:51 am
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| Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous)
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This is a great story...you've got to write lots more. Maybe make it really long with Harry falling in love with someone and having kids.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm afraid I'm going to finish it up tonight or possibly tomorrow...I said it would be complete by New Year's, and I really want to get back to "Slave Child". But I have thought that this could easily be expanded into a much longer story. Perhaps someday.... Thanks again!
Oh! Tobias! So, how will this development effect Harry and Sev? Will it be good or bad in the long run? (short run--I see fireworks in the near future!)
More soon please!
V.
Author's Response: Thank you! How will it affect Harry and Sev? Well, I'm going to try to finish it tonight so we'll see!
I don't often review anymore, but I just had to say, loved the last line. awesome. hehe
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Glad you liked it!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 28 Dec 2008 11:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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I'm glad I found another of your stories. You know I adore them. Lovely beginnings and I can't wait for more. I loved Severus asking Harry if he'd had a Babbling Beverage.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm having fun with this one, though I can't wait to get back to "Slave Child", too. I'm happy you like it!
What a coincidink! Of all the people to save from a raging fire, but Severus' father!
Aw, I'm loving this story Kristeh. I'm really curious where it's going. It's nice that Harry will go from having no one to rely on to having not only Sev be like his father, but to have a grandfather figure as well.
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Pandora! I'm happy you like it! I'll try to update again tomorrow.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 28 Dec 2008 10:29 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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wow, I really like how the chapter ends! Snape's father, it could lead to all sorts of interesting developements. And I liked how Harry's mind immediately jumped to Death Eaters when he talked to this man. It shows he still is traumatised by the war.
Update soon please
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I thought that Harry would just automatically be suspicious. He is still very affected by the war. Thanks again!
Haha, I knew it! Yay for Tobias making an appearance in the fic (I think...hopefully he isn't as abusive as he once was). I bet Harry forgot his broom and he'll have to go and see to Tobias to get it! Update soon-I love this!
-P.G.
Author's Response: Thank you! Harry didn't leave the Firebolt behind, but he and Severus will definitely be seeing the man again. I'll try to have the next chapter up tomorrow. Thanks again!
| Title: Chapter 5
| 28 Dec 2008 9:35 pm
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| Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous)
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I KNEW IT! As soon as he said he had had a witch wife and a son wizard I started thinking Tobias Snape! Is it him? Anyway nice chap! I'm loooking forward to more.
Nyx :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I can't for sure who the man is til the next chapter, but the clues are very anvil-sized, aren't they, lol?
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