Oh...what a lovely beginning. I look forward to the next chapters. A "10" for you, my dear.
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 05 Dec 2008 12:02 am
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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this is a very promising 1st chapter! Poor Harry, I can't imagine him without his friends... I hope Snape will be able to help.
Author's Response: Thank you! I can't really imagine Harry without his friends either. It was a hard decision to have them die, even in this short little fic. I decided to have it be that way mostly because if they were alive, the Weasleys and Hermione would just about have to be included in the story...no way they wouldn't be around Harry at Christmas time, and I really just wanted to write about Harry and Severus. There is also the fact that Hermione and Ron's deaths are a big part of the reason Severus decided to go back for Harry's sake. After acknowledging that he had abused Harry and was partially responsible for his pain, Severus couldn't just 'abandon' Harry knowing that he would be truly alone without his friends.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 04 Dec 2008 10:58 pm
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| Reviewer: guignou (Anonymous)
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this beginning is awesome :) i'm looking forward to reading you !
thanks !
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That was... interesting! Update soon, pls. Mila
| Title: Chapter 1
| 04 Dec 2008 10:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Kim (Anonymous)
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Great story, Kristeh! I'm sorry I haven't been great about Betaing the other. Every time I see it in my email I also see the notice that it's posted so I never get the chance to help. This story is awesome. I really enjoyed the first chapter. It's very satisfying to see Snape watch Harry's life and acknowledge his part in Harry's abuse. I know not all call it abuse, but I do. Great job! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you, Kim! I sent you a PM, and yeah, I call Snape's canon treatment of Harry abuse, too.
I love the idea! Can't wait for more !
Author's Response: Thank you!
Oh yessss, this is very interesting. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you like it!
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