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Reviews For A Wolf in Winter
I don't know if his remorse is believable. Yes and no on Silver being Remus, I had assumed it was a dead wizard or the wolf was cursed as punishment. I thought about it being Remus then set it aside thinking Remus would still be alive Author's Response: Well, he is still alive, just not in the same form. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks, I really enjoyed writing this story.
I also loved Sev's comment about huffing and puffing and blowing the door down! Author's Response: Thanks and I love Little Red Riding Hood and couldn't resist putting that little tag in. You'll see what happens with Sev and Harry soon.
I loved the dialogue between Severus and Remus, it was done perfectly, and I especially loved the part when Severus says, "Well, what are you waiting for? Christmas?" Beautiful1 Hope Remus can make Harry feel better and that haryr and Severus reconcile. Author's Response: Yeah, Sev has some great lines, doesn't he? Glad you liked the scenes and that I made you feel sad for both of them, like I did. Thanks and hope you like the end.
Awesome! LMFAO! Can't wait to see what happens next! Author's Response: Thanks! I liked that line too! You can see what happens since the next chapter is up!
Was I wrong. I like this Remus. I hate him in the book. So much. He's an idiot in the book. Just as bad as Sirius. Never would have guessed that. Hmm... Update soon. Author's Response: I like him too! He's much more concerned with his behavior towards Severus here and making amends, more of a responsisble adult, even if he is a wolf. Thanks for your review, as always.
Author's Response: I'm glad I got Harry down, that part was a little bit tough to write, I didn't want Harry to see like he was overreacting or something. Remus should be able to help him and it helped with the convincing that Remus couldn't lie to Severus. The next chapter's up!
In answer to your question, I may enter the christmas story... I've been thinking of something all morning... we'll see. Author's Response: Ha! I was hoping most of you woouldn't suspect till the end who Silver really was. That would ruin the surprise. Anyhow, you can read the rest of this now, it's been posted. Write a Christmas story, Zara, I'm sure it'll be great!
Author's Response: You were, great job with guessing Silver was Remus. And you won't have to wait for long, the last chapter is posted. |
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