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Reviews For A Wolf in Winter
Title: Remorse and Revelations 12 Sep 2014 7:52 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter
Title: Remorse and Revelations 01 Mar 2010 8:49 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    That was brilliant!
    I don't know if his remorse is believable.
    Yes and no on Silver being Remus, I had assumed it was a dead wizard or the wolf was cursed as punishment. I thought about it being Remus then set it aside thinking Remus would still be alive

    Author's Response: Well, he is still alive, just not in the same form.  Thanks!
Title: Remorse and Revelations 14 Jan 2009 6:00 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this chapter very much. Severus' and Silver's conversation and interactions were believable, and nicely done.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I really enjoyed writing this story.
Title: Remorse and Revelations 16 Dec 2008 6:17 am
Reviewer: Kerowyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! That was a great surprise. wasn't expecting that at all. Loved the way Severus was with him. And poor Harry, hope Severus tells him he forgives him, the kid needs to hear that. It'll make a huge difference.

    I also loved Sev's comment about huffing and puffing and blowing the door down!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I love Little Red Riding Hood and couldn't resist putting that little tag in.  You'll see what happens with Sev and Harry soon.
Title: Remorse and Revelations 16 Dec 2008 5:10 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like how you gave us both harry and sev's viewpoints here, they were well thought out and appropriate, I felt bad for each of them. I can relate to Sev's wishing he didn't have to punish his son, it's tough always being the heavy and hoping that your kid doesn't hate you for it later.

    I loved the dialogue between Severus and Remus, it was done perfectly, and I especially loved the part when Severus says, "Well, what are you waiting for? Christmas?"

    Beautiful1 Hope Remus can make Harry feel better and that haryr and Severus reconcile.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Sev has some great lines, doesn't he?

    Glad you liked the scenes and that I made you feel sad for both of them, like I did.

    Thanks and hope you like the end.

Title: Remorse and Revelations 16 Dec 2008 4:59 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it, they both reacted as expected and Severus' sarcasm was hilarious. My favorite line was, "You mean you can't huff and puff and blow it down? What kind of wolf are you?"

    Awesome! LMFAO!

    Can't wait to see what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I liked that line too! You can see what happens since the next chapter is up!
Title: Remorse and Revelations 15 Dec 2008 10:30 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Damn...

    Was I wrong. I like this Remus. I hate him in the book. So much. He's an idiot in the book. Just as bad as Sirius.

    Never would have guessed that. Hmm...

    Update soon.

    Author's Response: I like him too! He's much more concerned with his behavior towards Severus here and making amends, more of a responsisble adult, even if he is a wolf.  Thanks for your review, as always.
Title: Remorse and Revelations 15 Dec 2008 8:58 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    I did wonder if Silver was Remus in the beginning, and I'm really glad he was! Harry's reaction was heartbreaking and so accurate, I do hope Remus can calm him down. Thank goodness Remus was able to convince Severus that he was a good wolf! Good cliffhanger, I can't wait!

    Author's Response: I'm glad I got Harry down, that part was a little bit tough to write, I didn't want Harry to see like he was overreacting or something.  Remus should be able to help him and it helped with the convincing that Remus couldn't lie to Severus.  The next chapter's up!
Title: Remorse and Revelations 15 Dec 2008 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Bloody Brilliant! I can normally spot some of your plot points, and I had originally thought of Lupin when Silver was introduced, but as his description did not match Lupin, I discarded this guess post-haste. You definately pulled the wool over my eyes - well done!

    In answer to your question, I may enter the christmas story... I've been thinking of something all morning... we'll see.

    Author's Response:

    Ha! I was hoping most of you woouldn't suspect till the end who Silver really was.  That would ruin the surprise.

    Anyhow, you can read the rest of this now, it's been posted.

    Write a Christmas story, Zara, I'm sure it'll be great!

Title: Remorse and Revelations 15 Dec 2008 2:22 pm
Reviewer: Maria (hpfanficfan) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG! I was right, shite. *cough*. I thought that might be lupin when in saw that he was one of the main characters. Can't wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    You were, great job with guessing Silver was Remus.

    And you won't have to wait for long, the last chapter is posted.


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