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Reviews For Biscuit
Title: Chapter 1 Whoops 20 Dec 2008 11:06 pm
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very cute I can see the two of them tormenting each other and Minerva finding out where harry i

    Author's Response:

    Hey you cant read the end of the book first, thats cheating!

    Nah, I dunno whats gonna happen yet.

    Thanks for R&R, Jflame

Title: Chapter 2 Agreement 20 Dec 2008 6:15 am
Reviewer: BasiliskPrince (Signed) [Report This]
    Kinda surprised where that headed. XD I kinda figured Snape would use Harry's extended stay of being a puppy against Harry for awhile. That Harry would be reluctant and rather petulant about it but I didn't see this coming. Interesting spin. Knowing Harry, he'd want anything that kept him out of the limelight. Gotta say, you sure know your stuff buddy. I would slow down the progression of the story a tad bit to help keep a steadier flow of the story. Other than that? Have at it, buddy. You are doing a good job. May the pen be with you and may the next chapter be with me soon. >D I hope. XD

    Your pal, BasiliskPrince

    Author's Response:

    Oh don't worry, Snape.. ehem Professor Snape has plans for that Puppy. Puppys can be alot of trouble, espically if they are really Harry bloody Potter.

    I'll take it under advisement to slow the story down but Snape... ok Professor Snape is really in charge of this.

    Thanks for R&R, Jflame

Title: Chapter 2 Agreement 20 Dec 2008 5:40 am
Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Continues to be a good story, thanks for sharing with us :)

    Author's Response: Thanks Muggle 49. Professor Snape, Biscuit and I thank you for R&R. Jflame
Title: Chapter 1 Whoops 19 Dec 2008 11:47 pm
Reviewer: Paul1510 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    JFlame, very nice girl, certainly worth reading.
    It's nice to see that Sev has a heart and is doing his best for Harry,
    Love and warm hugs to my girl.

    Author's Response:

    Aww Uncle Paul you say the nicest things.

    Don't say that Sev has a heart, he may hear you. Of course he's doing his best for Harry, at the moment! Thanks, Jflame

Title: Chapter 2 Agreement 19 Dec 2008 11:20 pm
Reviewer: chelsea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    awww...that really was a sweet chapter...i thought snape was going to force harry to remain a dog forever!

    Author's Response: Hang on, Sev's the good one, Harry's the pain and Biscuit's just cute. thanks for reading, Jflame
Title: Chapter 2 Agreement 19 Dec 2008 9:19 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute story, but I'm confused about something. Isn't Harry a little old to be spanked? Isn't he seventeen in this? It's post Hogwarts, or am I misunderstanding.

    Nevertheless, I love Biscuit, and this is a really cute story. I'm looking forward to your next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Well maybe he is, ok I'll have a little chat with Sna...

    "Miss Flame! If I wish to spank that insolent brat for stealing from my stores then I shall and nothing that you can possibly say will change my mind!"

    Ahh...wee there you have it Pandora. Were both glad that you like Biscuit though.

    Thanks, Jflame

Title: Chapter 2 Agreement 19 Dec 2008 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Elise_Malfoy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aaaw....you write such cute stories!!! awwww.......lol, melting here.

    Harry's so sweet as a puppy and a boy!

    And hehe, Sev does have a heart!

    (looks around to make sure Sev didn't hear her say that. Oh. Oops. He did. Runs away, yelling: "AWESOME CHAPTERRRRRR!!!!!!")

    lol

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it, but please don't say things like that about Snape. He stands right behind me and glares as I read all the reviews. I can't take much more of his muttering about dunderheads and insolent brats and..owww ok ok. Snarky gi..oww. Thanks Elise, Jflame
Title: Chapter 2 Agreement 19 Dec 2008 8:26 pm
Reviewer: Liltggr (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm hooked! Great writing, JFlame! I absolutely love it!

    Author's Response: Well good. Keep reading couz. Jflame
Title: Chapter 1 Whoops 19 Dec 2008 5:13 pm
Reviewer: me (Anonymous) [Report This]
    thats awesome and adorable :) update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks, the next chapter is on it's way. Jflame
Title: Chapter 1 Whoops 19 Dec 2008 1:46 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    That last little bit had me chuckling first thing this morning. I look forward to chapter two.

    Author's Response:

    Don't worry Phoenix (cool name btw) chapter two is on its way. I'm starting on chapter three today. Thanks for r&r, Jflame


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