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Title: Chapter 80 – Talk with James 18 Apr 2010 12:08 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha! I wonder where he apparated. Mila

    Author's Response: :D Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 80 – Talk with James 18 Apr 2010 11:44 am
Reviewer: Valin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter... but what a mean cliffie! Plz update REAL SOON!!!

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Title: Chapter 80 – Talk with James 18 Apr 2010 9:19 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry needs to think first, great chapter. Really love this story.

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Title: Chapter 80 – Talk with James 18 Apr 2010 1:56 am
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the new chapter.... Can't wait to find out what happens between Harry and Severus.... Update soon please

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Title: Chapter 80 – Talk with James 18 Apr 2010 1:44 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh where did Harry apparate too now? He wouldn't consider the burrow so where did he go?

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Title: Chapter 80 – Talk with James 18 Apr 2010 1:38 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I know that Severus is angry, but if he knew his son at all, he would know that this would drive Harry away. Harry thinks that he has lost, not only his trust, but his love. It should have been Severus, not James, that spoke to Harry. This is a family issue and should have stayed IN the family. Bringing James, an outsider, in only widened the chasm that was forming and pushed Harry further away. Then to make things worse, they didn't actually deal with Harry's impassioned pleas for his father to show him that he did love him. Harry wasn't really pleading to be beaten, he just wanted to be acknowledge by the man, who's love he was begging for. Why didn't Severus say something...anything? And why did Thadeus just give Harry a potion and send him to bed? Harry's depression should have been dealt with. He is an extremely sensitive boy and yet, he was just simply sent to bed. At the very least, his mother should have spoken to him. Then to make things worse, they didn't make sure that the children couldn't hear their arguing. Now Harry feels that he has ruined everything and in an attempt to (in his mind) rectify his wrong has run away. I'm guessing that Harry used accidental magic to apparate in his panicked attempt to get away. Maybe now, Severus will realize just what HE has done to his son. Harry made a mistake, yes, but he didn't deserve to be shunned by his father.

    Author's Response:

    Wow, are you related to Poppy or Minerva? I would give your review to Severus, but at the moment he is panicking too much about his son vanishing in front of his eyes and dealing with a huge amount of guild. So have faith in him, He is not a hopeless case.

    To the rescue of the other members of the family I can only say that they know Severus and tried to speak with him and therefore send Harry into his bed.  I especially didn't let them tell him "You have to understand him, he can't change how he reacts" because that is the worst and stupiest you can say to a kid in that moment. Thadeus just gave a him a too light potion. I just imagined you telling my father all what you had to say in this review. I would love to see his face, The problem is people like him and Severus in this chapter (and the last) don't realize that they are wrong. Nothing you said would have really changed anything ,but it felt quite good to read it nevertheless. I can assure you that Severus is a good fathe,r and he will realize his mistake and make it all good again. Happy little ending is in view and your angry little soul will be calmed in the next chapter. Just be patient!

    Thank you very much for your review, Poppy, oh sorry, silverstargirl I meant ;)

Title: Chapter 80 – Talk with James 18 Apr 2010 1:36 am
Reviewer: christy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OMG Love this story!!! This chapter was great.... cept I hate where it ended lol update son PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

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Title: Chapter 80 – Talk with James 18 Apr 2010 1:06 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Poor Harry! :O


    What happened to him? Did he fall through a hole in the ice. I hope that whatever is wrong, that Severus can help him.

    Please update soon, I gotta know that Harry is going to be alight!


    Oh, and great chapter by the way.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 80 – Talk with James 18 Apr 2010 12:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no!!! What is going on? Awesome story. I am panicked myself, wondering what Harry did, and if I'm right in apparating, where he will end up. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: You will see in the next chapter! ;) Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 80 – Talk with James 17 Apr 2010 11:25 pm
Reviewer: Cammy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW!!! Superb chapter. I can hardly wait for the next. Love your writing. Thx.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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