I love all of your work. This is great, like everything else :D
Oh this chapter is wonderful.
Does this mean that Minerva and Albus are a couple? Isn't there a huge age gap there?
| Title: Chapter 12 – Harry 's New Home
| 16 Apr 2012 5:00 am
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| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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Oh god I hope there's some Severus-Harry time in here somewhere. And I just really don't like Albus-he keeps way too many secrets, plus why doesn't he have his own quarters. It would only make sense. Same with Minerva. And the twins are okay but they are only going to get in the way. But I'd compromise and jeep them if moody, albus, and Minerva weren't so everywhere.
| Title: Chapter 11 - Poppy in Distress
| 16 Apr 2012 4:47 am
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Weird that the adults didn't give him privacy and that Poppy was so unprofessional. Also that James just left work? St. Mungos is always busy. I also wish Harry and Severus had a lot more one on one action rather than dealing with everyone else right away as well.
| Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown
| 16 Apr 2012 4:36 am
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| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed)
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Great chapter although I'm a little concerned about Harry having so many adult role model type people because I was sort of hoping for a story biased towards Severus.
| Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus
| 16 Apr 2012 4:27 am
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Lovely so far; however, I'm a little wary of Harry living with Albus and Minerva as well as the Snapes. First it seems unrealistic to me and I'm concerned about whether there will be as many family moments with this new turnout.
Wow... I just loved this. Imagine my glee when I found there is a sequel. (Snickers) Severus singing the charlie mopps song. I didn't know anyone else played that game other than me!
I just love how you write Ivy and Sev. But I always love Sev when he's a loving father. I was hoping Harry would go for a name change, or a Potter-Snape kinda deal. Guess I'll find out soon.
I love this! My Sev is happy with a family, and Harry gets a loving family. Two thumbs up already. I loved the Shaving discussion. I just saw a pic on deviant Art where Sev was teaching harry how. Very cute. I can't wait to read the rest.
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