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Reviews For Harry and His New Family
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It was so nice to read the family accepting Harry so easily. It was a little odd that Harry referred them as his family so quickly, and even more odd that the said family didn't seem to take note of that in any sort of nonverbal reactions in the narration. But i am glad that Harry is happy here. Thanks for the terrific updates!! Author's Response: In my mind, I had let Harry ponder (or imagine) about Ivy as a mother even before she offered the adoption/guardianship. Therefore it was okay for me that he accepts it so easy, but I can understand that it could seem a little rushed for the readers. Sorry. I'm very glad that you like my story. Thanks for your review!
I do wish that there were more physical and characteristic descriptions of the twins as they are acting and moving in the scenes. I can't even remember how old or big they are, and I'd like to be able to imagine them and their faces better. They are very entertaining. I just bet that Harry will get into trouble with those books!!! Great setup, I am enjoying the development and background info. Author's Response: The twins are 4 (soon to be 5) and look exactly like Snape just younger and cuter. I have a drawing of Eathan on my deviantart page. For the rest you just have to use your imagination. :) Thank you very much for your review!
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Hope you update soon!!!! Author's Response: Maybe I let the Weasley twins teach them something about that, but I think Severus won't be happy about it. :) Thanks for your review!
i love dad Sev especially with the shaving bit lol Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review!
The twins are so warm towards to him xxx Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: I was a little unsure to let him say this brother thing while they spoke about Hedwig, but I'm relieved that you think it was okay. Thank you for your review! |
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