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Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 05 Feb 2009 2:01 am
Reviewer: Solitare (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome yet again, perfect end to a very long day at work for me. Thanks so much for updating!! Loved it.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words! :hug:
Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 05 Feb 2009 12:11 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    ... maybe it's just my wicked teenage mind, but the shaving discussion sounded dirty... just saying... anyway, the chapter was really entertaining. i like eathan and lysander. weird names, but i like that, too. like you're not scared to experiment. on a side not, i think it's a little weird for harry to say "oh my"... it just seems OOC- not just for Harry, but for teenagers in general

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I' have left my teenager times far behind me and so I have now idea what sounded dirty about the shaving scene, but I can assure you it wasn't meant to sound dirty!

    So teenager  don't say "Oh my"? What do they say? It would be helpful to know. English isn't my first language and so I don't know it!

    Thanks for your review!

Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 04 Feb 2009 8:49 pm
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this story. I think all of the boys are cute. I hope that Ron comes around Harry really needs those two as his friends. I think Severus will be a good dad for Harry. I hope that Ivy will go through his clothes and get him clothes that fit him, instead of Dudley's clothes.

    Author's Response: Yes, of course Ron and Harry will solve the problem. They will stay friends! The clothes problem will be solved in chapter 16, but not by Ivy. :) Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 04 Feb 2009 8:24 pm
Reviewer: Frogzilla08 (Signed) [Report This]
    this is a really great story I can't wait to see more

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 04 Feb 2009 5:26 pm
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The shaving part was funny. I didn't like how Harry got a panick attack just by thinking of his friend. Oh well, it was still really good. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the shaving part! Harry stood under great stress, because of the new situation and so it was easy for him to panick! He will learn to control it better in future! Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 04 Feb 2009 5:21 pm
Reviewer: dreameater (Signed) [Report This]
    the shaving scene really was so sweet:P snape is so fatherly already towards harry.. i do hope that harry's first shaving will be featured somewhere further along the story... it'll really be interesting to read that scene...

    lysander btw is

    Author's Response:

    You still think Ly is faroized??? No, he isn't. Believe me, Severus would not favorize one of his sons. Eathan will benefit a lot from Harry becoming his big brother, so you don't have to worry about him.

    Yes, I plan to add the first shaving of Harry in one of the later chapters! :)

    Thanks for your review! 

Title: Chapter 14 – The Round Tour II 04 Feb 2009 5:18 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah, the shaving scene was too cute!

    I love those adorable twins. I'm so happy that Harry has someone to love him and take care of him now.

    I'm looking forwards to your next update and finding out who the new character is. You have piqued my curiousity.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 04 Feb 2009 6:12 am
Reviewer: xxslytheringirlxx (Signed) [Report This]
    this is a really good story keep it
    up (write more soon)

    SG

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! The next chapter is up now!
Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 02 Feb 2009 5:26 pm
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was awesome, Severus wants Harry to feel like he's part of the family, I like that. I wonder how Harry knew of that potions master. I hope Harry doesn't get in trouble his first night. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: You will find out why Harry knew him in later chapters! :) Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 13 – The Round Tour I 02 Feb 2009 6:42 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    that was really cute

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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