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Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 26 Jan 2009 6:28 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter! I am really enjoying James as a character. I think that he might be my favorite original character in a long time. I don't really like the scenes with Harry and his friends as much as the scenes with James for some reason. Ivy seems lovely. I just hope that the story remains focused on Harry for awhile. :)

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you like James because I like him a lot. :)
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 26 Jan 2009 6:22 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    love it!! I think that Albus shouldn't give so many comments about his daughter though, like, "'Show me one human being that is able of being mad at that girl,' Albus said, chuckling." In my opinion, he would not say that as an answer to a child's question. He would be reassuring and plainly tell him that he is not mad. I think that's all I'd like to comment on in that regard.

    I adore that Harry is going to live with Snape and his wife. I just hope that Snape takes up the majority of the interaction with Harry, and James and Albus would be okay too. I love that the Snape's live with Dumbledore. That's a nice twist! I can't wait to see this new family dynamic. I wonder what kind of trouble Severus got into by developing bronchitis and not telling anyone.

    Thanks for posting this story here!

    Author's Response: I try to balance the interactings between Harry and his new family well. You will see what I mean when I post the chapters, where Harry moves in. Oh and of course Severus will get in trouble for hiding his bronchitis and for not doing what Poppy and James tell him. You will find out soon!
Title: Chapter 11 - Poppy in Distress 25 Jan 2009 11:09 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like it, and I can't wait for Severus and Harry to try to start a new chapter of thier lives!

    Author's Response: And I can't wait for submitting the next chapters. I have already written 3 more and are eagerly waiting for my beta to correct them. Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 23 Jan 2009 4:29 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i like the pace of this story, some fics i have read are rushed or seem to be, you tell the story in a nice fashion and give alot of details about the characters and everything, so carry on at this nice pace as its a great fic

    Author's Response:

    I'm very glad that you like the pace of this story. I was worried because this site is only for people who love Severus and Harry interactions. I felt it was necessary to let Severus out of some chapters to give the other characters a chance to intoduce themselve. Severus is still one of the two mean characters, but I fear that the readers here will be to impatient to wait. :( The next chapter will still be without Severus but than he will be there again for every chapter (as long as I can plan now)! The next chapter is ready to submit but I hold it back because someone already made clear that he/she is waiting for more Snape/Harry interactions. So maybe it is better to wait until I get the chapter, where Severus will appear again, back from my beta, so that I can submit chapter 11 and 12 shortly behind each other. I would hate to get flames for submitting chapters without Professor Snape here and hope that I can avoid it this way.

    I'm very glad about your possitive review. It calmed my nerves a little.

Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 22 Jan 2009 1:44 am
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love this chapter I think Severus Ivy Minerva and Dumbledore is going to have there hands full with a little boy

    Author's Response: Absolutly! :) Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 21 Jan 2009 2:00 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh My, Harry may think it's funny how Ivy can minipulate Alastor but what will he think when she uses her charms on him....

    Author's Response: He will find out very soon! :) Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 10 - The Nervous Breakdown 21 Jan 2009 4:32 am
Reviewer: cait- (writeurlife) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    where's the harry/snape interaction?? come on!!!

    Author's Response: Yeah, sorry! There will be still one chapter without him and then he will be in each chapter that will follow! I promise!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 21 Jan 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was cute. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 20 Jan 2009 7:22 pm
Reviewer: Mahi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love it except I think Harry should call Prof. Dumbledore grandpa instead. It's cuter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad you liked the chapter! Harry will already have problems with calling him Albus. I think 'grandpa' would be a little too much. Maybe later. :)
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 20 Jan 2009 1:35 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love Love Love, Poor Severus Minervia Ivy and Dumbledore. Will have their hands full, once he figures he can be a kid. but that will be good he needs to be a kid.

    Author's Response: Oh yes! :D Thanks for your review!

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