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Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 19 Jan 2009 12:49 am
Reviewer: Quipped to Death (Signed) [Report This]
    It feels a bit awkward hearing Harry call the headmaster by his first name but it's your story and to each his own. Despite that I like where this is going. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    It is awkward for Harry as well and he will need some time to get used to it. But it would be a little difficult to write this story when Harry would call them Prof. ... Just imagine Harry and his new family at the breakfast table and asking "Could you please pass me the marmelade, Professor?" and 4 people trying to grab the marmelade. And writing their full names would be a little tiring for me. So I know it is a little early to let him call them by their first name but I hope you and my other readers will get used to it. Thanks a lot for your review!

Title: Chapter 5 – The Examination Part One 19 Jan 2009 12:25 am
Reviewer: Quipped to Death (Signed) [Report This]
    This is quite humorous at the end here. I usually hate original characters but I like yours. Good job.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I'm glad you like my story.
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 18 Jan 2009 11:20 am
Reviewer: Barb (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh wow!! Please tell me you are going to write more in this series. It's ablsolutely wonderful

    Author's Response: Of course I write more. There are already more chapters written but my beta needs some time. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 18 Jan 2009 4:13 am
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    gosh.. that was nice. love the dumbledore/harry interaction. i like dumby in this story. he seems humane. unlike how other stories portray him. keep the chapters coming!

    Author's Response: I really like Dumbledore. But I didn't like how manipulative he was in the books. So I changed him a little for my story. :) Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 18 Jan 2009 3:09 am
Reviewer: Kazza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's so refreshing to read an alternative universe story which has Snape having a happy life. You're doing a great job with Harry - he hasn't become melodramatic about every little thing, which he sometimes suffers from in other fics. Your story is quite addictive.

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it that much and review!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 18 Jan 2009 2:19 am
Reviewer: Serenity Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    AWE...I love Professor Dumbledore!!!

    Author's Response: Me, too! :) Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 9 - The Talk with Albus 18 Jan 2009 1:01 am
Reviewer: Ara (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A lovely chapter, where things are progressing again. I'm sorry to say that the last couple of chaptes after the Examination chapters rather felt like they had lost the momentum and life that you showed in the writing of the previous chapters. Having said that they did give information about the other parties involved, so I'l forgive that! I think I recal your mentioning that English wasn't your first language? The writing you're doing now doesn't show that very much any more; to be honest you're becoming quite respectably capable, and better than some who have spoken the language all their life. Well done and keep up the good work!

    Author's Response:

    About my language I have to disagree. I'm glad that the staff here isn't very picky. On other ff platforms I have so many problems with submitting that it starts to depress me. Even after 2 betas, and sometimes 3 betas, have checked a chapter, they still find a lot of mistakes and reject them. :(

    Thanks a lot for your review!

     

Title: Chapter 8 – Best Friends 13 Jan 2009 8:34 pm
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am glad that Ron and Hermione did nto turn their back on him because he is with Snape.

    Author's Response: They don't know it at the moment. Their will come some problems in future. I hope I can update soon.
Title: Chapter 7 – Professor Dumbledore-Snape 13 Jan 2009 8:33 pm
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved this story. I could see poor Severus pouting about being stuck in bed for two days, and Ivy's comfort of Harry.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it.
Title: Chapter 8 – Best Friends 13 Jan 2009 7:13 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute! I can't wait to meet Snape's family!

    Author's Response: Soon it will happen. Please be patient.

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