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Title: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey 30 Dec 2008 10:08 pm
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!! Please please please update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review! I still have to wait for my beta to correct the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey 30 Dec 2008 2:09 am
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i loved this chapter I think that Severus is really coming out of his shell in this chapter with Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Title: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey 29 Dec 2008 7:15 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw poor Harry! I really hope that Sev will offer him a nice safe haven.

    Nice beginning, and I'm looking forward to see where you are going with the story!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review!
Title: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey 29 Dec 2008 7:08 am
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very good! please continue!

    Author's Response: Of course I will continue! :) Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey 29 Dec 2008 6:44 am
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    thanks for clearing up the confusion i had! i loved this chapter. i cant wait to read more

    Author's Response: I'm glad that it is clear now! Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey 29 Dec 2008 6:18 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter. Poor Harry, he seems so traumatized. I hope things start getting better for him soon. Thanks for the hug and the chapter. ;)

    Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Title: Chapter 4 – Meeting Madam Pomfrey 29 Dec 2008 5:21 am
Reviewer: Danni Girl 21 (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't believe you ended it there! That is a killer. An update soon please!

    Author's Response: I have already written the next chapter together with this one. And that was the best part to devide the chapters. Even when it is a cliffy. The next one will be much longer.
Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 28 Dec 2008 12:45 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful 3 chapters! i love where this story is headed. just to clarify...this is set in harry's 3rd year and he killed voldemort in his 2nd year? Snape is also married to a relation of Dumbledores?

    I assume that you arent following the plot of the books as i could find no mentioin of the chamber of secrets but thats cool coz i love an original story.

    I cant wait to read more...

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I realized that some people are confused how old Harry is in my story and in which year he is. But you got it all right. I think I will make it clear in front of the next chapter so that nobody is confused. And you also are right that I don't follow the plot of the books. I tried to get rid of Voldemort as fast as possible because I wanted to concentrate on Harry. I needed him young because otherwise tha adoption wouldn't make much sense. I hope I don't confuse the poeple too much.

    Prof. Dumbledore-Snape is the daughter of Albus and Minerva. This will become clear in later chapters but it didn't hurt to tell you here. :) They also have 5 year old twin boys. Okay I think I gave enough away now. :D

    Thanks a lot for your reply the next chapter will be up soon!

Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 28 Dec 2008 4:55 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this so far. The background story is unique. I cannot wait for more, thanks!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! The next chapter will be up soon. :hug:
Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 28 Dec 2008 2:51 am
Reviewer: Cherlindrea34 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Author's Response: Working on giving the background informations is the hardest part of this story. What more background do you think I have to give?"

    For this story you don't need to go into to much detail on the back ground, but perhaps you could do some flash backs with both snape and harry while they are developing there relationship.

    As for the type of back ground, how did voldimort get his body back, how did they find out the hiding places of the other objects and destroy them? Those would be good to know, as in canon he did not get his body back till 4th year and used Harry's blood.

    I really like this story though, just thought I would give you a few things to think on as I always find this helps when writing out a story line.

    Author's Response: Okay, I understand. To be honest, I really hate Voldemort and tried to get rid of him as fast as possible. Therefore the part was only that short. *blush*

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