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Reviews For Harry and His New Family
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review! I still have to wait for my beta to correct the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Nice beginning, and I'm looking forward to see where you are going with the story! Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your review!
Author's Response: Of course I will continue! :) Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: I'm glad that it is clear now! Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Author's Response: I have already written the next chapter together with this one. And that was the best part to devide the chapters. Even when it is a cliffy. The next one will be much longer.
I assume that you arent following the plot of the books as i could find no mentioin of the chamber of secrets but thats cool coz i love an original story. I cant wait to read more... Author's Response: Yes, I realized that some people are confused how old Harry is in my story and in which year he is. But you got it all right. I think I will make it clear in front of the next chapter so that nobody is confused. And you also are right that I don't follow the plot of the books. I tried to get rid of Voldemort as fast as possible because I wanted to concentrate on Harry. I needed him young because otherwise tha adoption wouldn't make much sense. I hope I don't confuse the poeple too much. Prof. Dumbledore-Snape is the daughter of Albus and Minerva. This will become clear in later chapters but it didn't hurt to tell you here. :) They also have 5 year old twin boys. Okay I think I gave enough away now. :D Thanks a lot for your reply the next chapter will be up soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! The next chapter will be up soon. :hug:
For this story you don't need to go into to much detail on the back ground, but perhaps you could do some flash backs with both snape and harry while they are developing there relationship. As for the type of back ground, how did voldimort get his body back, how did they find out the hiding places of the other objects and destroy them? Those would be good to know, as in canon he did not get his body back till 4th year and used Harry's blood. I really like this story though, just thought I would give you a few things to think on as I always find this helps when writing out a story line. Author's Response: Okay, I understand. To be honest, I really hate Voldemort and tried to get rid of him as fast as possible. Therefore the part was only that short. *blush* |
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