Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 19 Dec 2008 4:41 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story. Harry sounds so drunk it's funny. I cannot wait for more. Thanks for the chapter.

    Author's Response: Tee hee, I imagine he'd be very funny to see. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 1 18 Dec 2008 10:40 pm
Reviewer: guignou (Anonymous) [Report This]
    AWESOME ! update soon please !
    many thanks :D

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, and I'll get right on with the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 1 18 Dec 2008 10:31 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, dear. Harry sounds like a friend of mine did when he was anesthetised with sodium pentothal. I had wishedfor a tape recorder so my firend could hear what he was saying becuase he didn't remember saying naything after he finally woke up. Very fun, and interesting idea and excellent characterization and dialog.

    Author's Response:

    LOL, poor dear, I imagine he must have been quite funny. Thank you so much for the review!

Title: Chapter 1 18 Dec 2008 1:46 pm
Reviewer: Kyleigh (Anonymous) [Report This]
    As you asked for any mistakes to be pointed out. :) Here's one that made me laugh. :) It only took me three reads to realise that you subsitituted a wrong word... for the life of me I could't figure it out...

    Here's the quote..


    As loath he was to admit it, Pomfrey was right, his healing smells did not go beyond the common cold and paper cut.


    Hehe... Snape has a healing smell!

    I really am enjoying your beginning... I like a not lucid Harry... It's always a bit of fun...

    Author's Response:

    Embarrassing but funny as well, lol. Thank you for pointing that out and for the brilliant review!

Title: Chapter 1 18 Dec 2008 1:22 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story. Poor Snape is HE going to get an earful!

    Can't wait for the update to see what Harry reveals next!

    Author's Response:

    Sadly, Harry will be back to normal in the next chapter. They get rescued. Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 1 18 Dec 2008 11:10 am
Reviewer: Laume (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *giggles* pick on someone his own size...popping up like acne...LOL....

    Author's Response: (Grin) glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 1 18 Dec 2008 9:42 am
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is a very interesting first chapter, and quite funny too.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 1 18 Dec 2008 5:09 am
Reviewer: Muggle49 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    From the depths to a hearty laugh in one sentence! Well done, more please :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! Writing the next chapter now.
Title: Chapter 1 18 Dec 2008 5:03 am
Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story and hope you continue it soon. The sheer number of great lines is amazing.

    “You’re going to hate yourself tomorrow,” I routinely feel that way after surgery. Waking up from anesthesia me weepy and incoherent.

    “That’s Voldemort’s job, even though I don’t know why--his fault for picking on a baby. Didn’t his mama ever tell him to pick on someone his own size?” priceless

    “He just keeps popping up--like acne!” Next time I go to the dermatologist, I'll feel compelled to say that I have Voldemort on my face.

    Author's Response: LOL, I wonder what your dermatologist would say to that! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 1 18 Dec 2008 5:02 am
Reviewer: LJD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like this story so far, the summary made me laugh- I mean who could resist a doped-up Harry and bad-tempered Snape stuck together in an enclosed space?
    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Hehe, thanks! Snape could have been worse, Harry's still alive isn't he? :D Thanks again!


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