Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 2 04 Jan 2011 6:19 pm
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story!! :)
    The only mistakes I saw were where you should have had "too" instead of "to".
Title: Chapter 2 28 Jun 2010 1:35 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was sweat!

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 2 18 Apr 2010 6:34 pm
Reviewer: ALBIE (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ODIE!!!
    LOL
    very cute story
    minor error...
    “That’s Snape writing, I’ve seen it enough B AT its usually in red."

    Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, I appreciate it! :)
Title: Chapter 2 28 Mar 2010 9:38 pm
Reviewer: Fujoshi (Signed) [Report This]
    *grin* I'd have named it Sev. =)

    I saw a puppy. Hagrid sat on it. It had a pigs tail.

    He saw a puppy. Hagrid sat on his cake and Dudley had a pigs tail. He just blended those, didn't he? =)

    Author's Response: ROFL! I do beleive you are one of the very few to get that, *snickers* Everyone else just says, "Er? Okay, Harry's really out of it." ^_^ So, yep, he blended those. Thank you for reviewing! I really appreciate it!
Title: Chapter 2 26 Jul 2009 9:18 pm
Reviewer: catherinerickman (Signed) [Report This]
    I'd love to see snape play with that puppy! Great story, wonderful original idea.

    Author's Response:

    LOL, :D That'd be brilliant! Thank you for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 2 16 May 2009 1:48 am
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute little story - side note when Harry opens the present with the Crup in it you said it was a "plane" box, it should be a "plain" box.

    Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out, and tasking the time to review! :)
Title: Chapter 2 25 Apr 2009 3:14 am
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    Cute :). I liked the puppy and how Harry said that Hagrid had sat on a puppy but it was disfigured anyway. Snape is such a great character.

    Author's Response: :D Thank you! Glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing.
Title: Chapter 2 27 Mar 2009 5:19 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    "b at its usually in red" I think you mean "but"? Fun story!

    Author's Response: Yes, thanks for pointing that out! :D
Title: Chapter 2 22 Feb 2009 1:17 am
Reviewer: Clovergirl22 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww. This story was both amusing and cute. Harry all drugged out is adorable as can be. I enjoyed this a lot.
    ~Clovergirl22

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. Yes, Harry was rather sweet, he should get loopy more often--it would amuse Snape I'm sure.
Title: Chapter 2 28 Jan 2009 4:04 am
Reviewer: studiohq (Signed) [Report This]
    That was Seriously cute..and it begs for more!

    Ok *I'm* begging for more...but as a stand alon...

    It's Brilliant!

    Author's Response: Lol, glad you liked it so much! I'm afraid that if I write another, I'll never get any of my other stories finished! So, it is unlikely to happen, but thank you for reviewing!

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