Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 2 25 Jan 2009 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Aiwendil (Signed) [Report This]
    Sweet!
    I liked your Snape, strict to the roots and always wanting to find some reason to punish Harry, but fair and resourceful...

    Thanks a lot!
    ai

    Author's Response: You're very welcome, thank YOU for taking the time to review! :D
Title: Chapter 2 02 Jan 2009 12:23 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    That was marvelous! I want a crup. Please please please!!!

    Author's Response: Good luck finding one, :) Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 2 29 Dec 2008 9:34 am
Reviewer: Svarra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like the premise of this story. You have quite a few continuity errors. You repeatedly state that Harry was staying at the castle alone for Christmas, but then Ron and Hermione are in the last scene on Christmas day. You also say that it is a year after Sirius has died, but then imply that Harry has never met or had detention with Umbridge. These continuity errors are very offsetting.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, someone pointed this out on another site. It makes me want to bang my head into the wall. I'll fix them, thank you.

Title: Chapter 2 28 Dec 2008 11:38 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely story! Mila

    Author's Response:

    Thank you

Title: Chapter 2 28 Dec 2008 6:33 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Ok, I'm waiting for Garfield to show up - or would that be Crookshanks? LOL

    Author's Response:

    Um, thanks I think.

Title: Chapter 2 28 Dec 2008 4:55 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story! It was very entertaining to read, I especially liked the interaction in the tunnel. I had to smirk at some of the things Snape had to endure with an out-of-it Harry!

    Odie is a cutie and I'm glad Harry got him as a Christmas surprise! However, I'm quite saddened to hear that Hagrid sat on a puppy :( He didn't really, did he?! *sniffle*

    P.S. The book Hermione got Harry was great, I loved the battle of wits line!

    Author's Response: Lol, no, Hagrid didn't sit on a puppy. Harry's mixed brain thought of the cake Hagris gave him as a puppie, the cake was squashed. Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 2 28 Dec 2008 4:08 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, "Don't let Hagrid sit on this one." I enjoyed this.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you did, thank you.
Title: Chapter 2 27 Dec 2008 7:48 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw...that is so cute!

    A puppy, Snap? The man's going soft! LOL

    Author's Response: I'm sure he would do something horribly mean to make up for this glitch in his snarky outside, lol. Thank you.

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