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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Phoenix's Flight
OMG That was the COOLEST story!!! You had some nice pacing, and great description, and it was full of emotion!!!!! *gushes* It was just great! I enjoyed every second and hope there is a sequel planned if not already in progress :) Blessings, Vana
wonderful story, at first when it looked like draco had died i swear that i was going to send an angry review but then he was allive and all was well, oh well. this was a wonderful story writen quite elequently, i saw a few verb tense mistakes, but it wasnt bad at all and not rampant. well i know that this story deserves more of a review but im hungry. well best of luck! ~~Kira
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