That really was the perfect gift! Such a wonderful present, memories and photos. And I liked how they opened the presents together too. A very sweet story, Zara! Merry Christmas!
Author's Response: Thanks, Snapegirl - Glad you liked it, especially since you needled me into it! It was fun though! LOL
Yay! harry was adopted1 I love the way ypou described the effect the potion had on them and how Sev held him after it and again in his quarters. So beautiful!
I also liked the explanation for the potion ingredients too.
Aww, that last image was so sweet. And I hope they can hurry and get the adoption finalized before Albus returns.
I love Minerva1 She's such a card. And Harry's reaction to their plan was perfect, especially the part when he looked at them back and forth. I could just picture it. And I like how he accepted Sev's offer gracefully, without the customary ranting and raving.
I also liked the way you had Sev wish Minerva and her grand niece and children happy holidays, proving he does care about other people.
Oh good, at least Harry has Min, Sev, and Poppy on his side now. Let the games begin!
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| 26 Dec 2008 2:03 am
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| Reviewer: A-zla (Anonymous)
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I wonderful story! Especially, I enjoyed seeing Minerva and Snape working together to help Harry. I love stories showing some kind of friendship between them, I can imagine it very well.
Cool! I like this story.
(though it would've been nice if you mentioned at the beginning that it was a sequal)
Are you going to do more?
I'd REALLY like to see AD's reaction to the change in guardians.
Absolutely lovely! Happy Christmas and I hope your New Year is a prosperous and creative one.
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS OVER!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!
ITS NOT FAIR!!!!!! *weeps* TE SWEETNESS
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