awe! this is so aweseome!
lol. i'm really enjoying this fic!
| Title: December 26th
| 04 Dec 2010 7:48 pm
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| Reviewer: myscus (Anonymous)
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This is adorable. Sad but cute, thank you.
Wow! I've read so many of your fics, I can't believe I missed this one. Your English is getting so good!!! In four chapters I've only heard one thing that sounded off-- you said about severus 'he'll come over it'. Normally we'd say "he'll get over it".
| Title: December 21st
| 02 May 2010 5:59 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hey!
Your English is great, my only issue is Harry's vocabulary. Most people don't use formal language in everyday conversation. Especially kids.
*smiles* Kudos on a very fluffy story. Luv Severus :).
I'm glad little Harry could be saved from the Dursleys and that he now has a home and proper guardian. He sure seems quite content now with his new life!
Sweet and cheerful story!
What a nice story! I wonder if Dumbledore punished Dursleys somehow... Mila
| Title: December 25th, Morning
| 27 Dec 2008 4:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Kris (Anonymous)
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I'm enjoying your story, and haven't had any trouble with your language use. Thanks for the fic!
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