| Title: December 21st
| 02 May 2010 5:59 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hey!
Your English is great, my only issue is Harry's vocabulary. Most people don't use formal language in everyday conversation. Especially kids.
You write very well, especially considering that English is not your first language!
Wow, for not being a native English speaker, that's pretty good. I wouldn't have known if you didn't say in your end note. I really like your story so far--the idea of Harry only wanting to see and breathe a little better is really sad. I hope Mrs. Figg gives the letter to Dumbledore because maybe he can fix this.
-P.G.
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