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Title: A May 2nd Carol in Prose, Being a Ghost Story of Hogwarts 28 Dec 2008 12:04 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    (Squeal!) Happy endings, love 'em! Thank you writing this, I really liked it. When James said 'You've given Harry most of his life' it made me smile. His part and Sirus were my favorite--and when Harry showed up in the end.
    Sorry I didn't get to read it earlier!
    Scorpia

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, you know I'd been looking for your comment.  James has had sixteen years to stew in the afterlife and come to erm, interesting conclusions.  Sirius on the other hand... Does not stew.

    Yeah, Snape is not the sort to change his ways that easily, is he?  Harry wouldn't take well to it if he did.

Title: A May 2nd Carol in Prose, Being a Ghost Story of Hogwarts 27 Dec 2008 2:50 am
Reviewer: silent_soliloquy318 (Signed) [Report This]
    "He is an arrogant self centered boy, and if someone doesn't stop him, he will become a monster."

    That sounds exactly like how Tom Riddle was or it sounds like how many people could of described Professor Snape.

    This was such a wonderful story, thank you for writing it. (Sorry, I am not more verbose on it.)

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.  The ironic thing is, Harry, whose eyes are on the floor, isn't acknowledging the attention because it makes him so uncomfortable. On the other hand, Harry probably needs something to fight against, not to keep him from being a monster, but to give him something to do.
Title: A May 2nd Carol in Prose, Being a Ghost Story of Hogwarts 26 Dec 2008 8:02 pm
Reviewer: daeshie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    May second is my birthday! Great oneshot.

    Author's Response: Thank you, you're burthday is on the day of the final battle for Hogwarts!
Title: A May 2nd Carol in Prose, Being a Ghost Story of Hogwarts 26 Dec 2008 5:49 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! I read this last night but my brain was fried so I didn't review. You are so talented. I love the intricacies of this, even though it's not a long story. Your characters are spot on. And an interesting concept to boot. Loved the ending too.

    Author's Response:

    Tausend Dank!  This was in fact only supposed to be about two thousand words long, but then it mushroomed out from under me.  I was so worried I wouldn't have it done on time.  The Marauders and Snape are my favorite characters to write, together or separately, so I'm glad you think I did them justice in this.

    Ach, my brain's fried too.

Title: A May 2nd Carol in Prose, Being a Ghost Story of Hogwarts 26 Dec 2008 4:16 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, very interesting. Somehow, I don't think that Severus is going to become the spirit of loving Wizardry everywhere, but he will keep everyone's head on straight and save his Syltherins.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, it kind of surprised me as I wrote.

    Nope, no radical conversion to being a cheerful gift giving pillar of friendship and forgiveness for our friend Severus, but then if he did become such, he'd frighten his old students and someone would lock him away in St. Mungos.

Title: A May 2nd Carol in Prose, Being a Ghost Story of Hogwarts 26 Dec 2008 9:09 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I really enjoyed this. Your Marauders were all very much in character. I liked that James pitied Snape in the end and that Sirius was still a nasty git even though he must know at some level that Snape has helped Harry out a lot. My favorite part though is when Snape hear's "God Rest Ye Merry Hippogriffs" at the very beginning. That cracked me up. Great work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  In <i>A Christmas Carol</i>, Scrooge hears "God Rest Ye Merry Gentlemen" before he meets Marley, so I figured I'd throw in Sirius' version of the song.  The Marauders are some of my favorite characters to write, because they can all be such idiots when they want to be.

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