Title: School and Insecurities
| 29 Jul 2020 3:14 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Just found this story, it is really good. If you can please continue it
Title: School and Insecurities
| 25 Nov 2016 9:55 am
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Reviewer: Mae19 (Anonymous)
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Really good story. Please write more
Please finish this story it is so cute.
AWWWW! Please update soon!
I like this story. Update soon.
Title: School and Insecurities
| 16 Dec 2010 6:50 am
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Reviewer: Caesara (Signed)
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I like this! I really like good Lucius and Draco :) I hope things get better for Harry! Why does harry talk in chopped sentences when he talks about abuse?
Title: School and Insecurities
| 13 Feb 2009 12:50 am
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Reviewer: AvidReader (Anonymous)
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Wow. This story is fantastic!! I love it!
Good story. I remember, there's a story called "Bonds of Betrayal" where Harry and Draco meet at a young age. Severus wasn't Harry's guardian. McGonagall was but Severus nice to Harry and was hoping Harry would be a good influence on Draco since Draco would spend the day at Hogwarts every now and then. Like your story, "Bonds of Betrayal" dealt with Harry being rescued from an abusive situation when he was a small. In "Bonds of Betrayal", Harry continued to have relapses even when he was 13. He was friends with both Draco and Ron but Draco and Ron didn't get along with each other. If you want Harry to team up with Fred and George, it would be interesting to see how them and Draco would interact. Also, about Harry spending time at the Malfoys with kids who are from families that don't have a favorable opinion of muggles... I think Dumbledore would be concerned about that as well as the therapist. There's a chance that kind of ideology might rub off on him and given his expireance with muggles, its a disaster waiting to happen. I think if Severus wants Harry not to be predjadice again muggles and muggle borns, he needs to be exposed more to the muggle world. Anyways, keep up the good work.
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