I've just found this and started to read but couldnt stop!! Very good can't wait for more chapters.
Oh, that was hard to hear Harry saying such things. It would be hard at any age, but especially with him being so young, poor kid. But that is all he ever heard before, so of course he believes it. I'm just glad that Severus understands better the kind of emotional wounds that Harry has so he can help him to heal and to see what a wonderful boy he is. It's nice to see that Harry is going to be helped and that the Dursleys and Marge are going to be punished. I agree about Marge...she's a nasty piece of work.
I do wonder whether Lucius, even if he is still the same to outsiders, will learn to like Harry and be supportive of him rather than an enemy.
Great chapter!
| Title: Depression
| 02 Jan 2009 4:41 am
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| Reviewer: shan182 (Anonymous)
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again! great job with the story! keep them coming! though.. i was wondering if remus is going to appear. cause no matter what harry is his 'cub'. is he going to make an appearance?
I'm glad that mess got sorted out! Poor little Harry, it was so sad to hear him saying such things about himself. At least he can continue being a happy little boy with his guardian again :)
BTW, I agree with several of your views that you shared in the Author's notes. Marge is a very hateful woman, who had absolutely no right to be so hurtful towards Harry. Also, I'm glad you are going to keep Lucius in character (I was a bit concerned at first) and I agree with your thoughts on how Draco's parents would treat him.
So far I think you're doing great job with this story and I hope to read more!
P.S. Is there hope for the Weasleys and/or Remus to be included in this story? I love those characters :D
| Title: Lost
| 01 Jan 2009 2:19 am
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| Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry, Severus should have explained things better, and made sure Harry wasn't listening when he talked to Dumbledore. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
| Title: Birthday party
| 31 Dec 2008 8:08 am
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| Title: Lost
| 31 Dec 2008 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: Nyx (Anonymous)
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GREAT JOB!! I can't believe you left it there though! BAD CLIFFE LOL! Again great work and i can't wait for more.
Nyx :)
Poor Harry.
He got caught by Adult double-talk. Sev forgot that little Harry takes what is told him LITERALLY word for word.
Ah poor Harry!
I hope that Sev straightens Harry out before the poor little guy takes it into his head to leave because he thinks that he's unwanted. And I hope that Sev gives Harry a big hug too!
Oh, that is so sad. I can understand Severus' reaction...he was terrified out of his mind that something horrible had happened to Harry. There is no worse fear for a parent than when your child is missing. And all to often, when you find them unharmed the relief turns to anger. Severus is still pretty new at this parenting thing and of course he's going to make mistakes.
I can understand perfectly Harry's way of thinking and that ending is just heartbreaking. I hope Severus figures out what Harry is thinking soon!
Oh, the birthday party is really cute, too!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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