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Title: The Remorse of a Dursley 28 Dec 2008 6:30 am
Reviewer: dreameater (Signed) [Report This]
    interesting story... I'm wondering to see where this goes... I was really taken aback though by how remorseful Vernon was... I guess I've been reading so much stories where the Dursleys especially Vernon were such heartless monsters that I forgot they're human. Vernon's grief though is believable though I still can't fathom how Harry could've reacted that way and died with being dropped too hard... maybe he punctured a lung??

    In any case, best of luck and please update soon:P

    (*hands some cookies* really really soon ok? lol )

    Author's Response:

    Thanks :) I was kind of debating whether or not I'd have Vernon feel remorse at first, but I decided I would. There were times in Harry Potter where Vernon was really mean to Harry, but I don't think he ever wanted him dead. Just out of sight out of mind.

    He just lost his breath for a minute. Have you ever fell off something too hard and lost your breath for a sec? I did that once. That's what happened to Harry and Vernon literally whipped him hard on the floor.

    Anyway, next chapters will be up.

Title: The Remorse of a Dursley 28 Dec 2008 5:10 am
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting story. I cannot wait to see where this goes. Thanks for sharing.

    Author's Response: Your welcome, and thanks for the review
Title: The Remorse of a Dursley 28 Dec 2008 3:53 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor little Harry! That sweet child nearly got murdered, it's horrible :( At least the Dursleys felt remorse, if they hadn't, they truly would be heartless fiends. I wonder what the Dursley’s reactions would be if they saw Harry alive now?

    I'll keep a look out for the next chapter to see what happens :)

    Author's Response: You'll see in the next chapter. Thanks for the review!
Title: The Remorse of a Dursley 27 Dec 2008 11:59 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! Where did Harry go? Did he show up at Snape's house then?

    Hmm, anxious to see your next chapter, to see what happens to Harry.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Title: The Remorse of a Dursley 27 Dec 2008 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I really like this! Poor little Harry. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Although he got hurt, you'll see it was the best thing that happened to him. :)

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