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Title: Once Upon a Winter's Night . . . 29 Apr 2009 11:30 pm
Reviewer: Luna Lovegood (Anonymous) [Report This]
    For Snapegirl's amazing performance, 84 points to Slytherin.

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    Story Plot: 1480/2500

    Direction Flow: 600/640
    Descriptions: 30/34

    Spelling & Grammer: 3792/3814

    Character Introductions: 6/6
    Dialogs Speech: 70/100
    POV: 5/5

    Story Opening: 5/5
    Chapter End: 2/3

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    Overall: 5990/7107

    Percentage: 84
    Currently Slytherin house is in lead, though Ravenclaw are not far behind. Great story!

    Author's Response: Thanks for your interesting point system and for reading!
Title: Once Upon a Winter's Night . . . 19 Feb 2009 10:44 pm
Reviewer: fleetermouse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I meant to tell you in my review of your last story that I really like the sprites. Nice touch. And your writing is as lyrical as always! I love this series!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Glad you're enjoying it1 The wind sprites are something that will appear every so often in each of the stories, you'll see them again at the end of this tale.
Title: Once Upon a Winter's Night . . . 30 Dec 2008 2:13 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great beginning I'm so happy you posted a sequel. I love the Little Match Girl and can't wait to see what happens with Holly and who her dad is--must be a real creep.

    Author's Response: He is a very nasty man as you'll see when you read the next chapter, which is posted now.
Title: Once Upon a Winter's Night . . . 29 Dec 2008 5:41 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Good begining! I always loved the little match girl even though it was sad. So, will this be a sister for Harry?

    V.

    Author's Response: yes, it was one of my favorites too.  You never know about that, could be.  But you can read the next chapter and find out more about her.
Title: Once Upon a Winter's Night . . . 28 Dec 2008 9:16 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    WhooHooo - a new one, I want more. Love all of these stories.

    Author's Response: Thanks and here you go! The next chapter is up!
Title: Once Upon a Winter's Night . . . 28 Dec 2008 8:12 pm
Reviewer: Mikee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    LOL -- funny you should post this now. I'd been thinking about you over the holidays, wondering when you'd put something else up. Great timing.

    I quited liked this. I am unfamiliar with the match girl thing, though I do like Hans Christian Anderson -- I must have missed that story. Anyway, being unfamiliar with that will make this story all the more interesting, I think.

    I am quite looking forward to seeing what you do next, and how Severus reacts to the little girl's explanation of how it was she was lying frozen in Diagon Alley.

    Thank you.

    Author's Response:

    Oh it's a great story, though a very sad one, but it teaches an important lesson, you should definitely read it. My story is loosely based upon it.

    You can see Sev's reaction now as a matter of fact. 

Title: Once Upon a Winter's Night . . . 28 Dec 2008 8:02 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent as always! Can't wait for the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Thanks and here's the next one coming at ya.
Title: Once Upon a Winter's Night . . . 28 Dec 2008 7:34 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Interesting beginning. Hmm, I want to know more about this mysterious girl!

    Harry always manages to mee the most interesting characers, doesn't he?

    Author's Response: He does and you can learn more about her now, as I've just posted the next chapter.
Title: Once Upon a Winter's Night . . . 28 Dec 2008 6:47 pm
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This sounds GREAT! I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
    Nyx:)

    Author's Response: Thanks and I have just updated, so you can learn more about Holly.
Title: Once Upon a Winter's Night . . . 28 Dec 2008 4:40 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ::arches eyebrow::

    You have time to write /this/ story but not the sequels to Angel or Prince? ::narrows eyes:: My darling, I love your writing, you know that, and this story is truly amazing. ::slyly:: Where'd you get the idea for her being a Seer? ::strokes invisible beard:: It wouldn't have anything to do with a certain BD character profile now would it?

    ::shakes head:: Sapphire blue eyes... I love sapphire blue. And violet. And green. But violet especially. You know why. ::winks::

    Hurry up with Prince! I want to see what you're going to do with Philip. ::holds up hands:: Don't hurt me! I'll wait, I'll wait!

    Update soon, dear.

    Holly sounds very intriguing and I think you should send a certain vampire after a certain little girl's father to teach him a lesson. ::winks::

    I take my leave for now. ::bows::

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I'm working on those, don;t worry.  But I might just start the sequel to Prisoner first, I have a very interesting storyline brewing for that.  The idea for her being a seer came from part of the Little match Girl story, since in the original story, the girl imagines different visions in the fire as the matches burn down, I just made it magical.

    I love sapphire eyes and yes, i know about the violet ones. 

    Yes,  Phil should be sent after him, I think he could teach said father a very good nasty well-deserved lesson. 

    See ya!


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