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Title: Heartless 09 Jan 2009 2:42 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Holly!

    Damn that heartless Lucius! I loved it when Silver bit him.

    Severus needs to get her some professional help soon!

    Author's Response: Me too and you're right, he does need to get her help and he will!
Title: Heartless 07 Jan 2009 9:46 am
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved the part where Silver bit Lucius! :-) Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    That was one of my favorites too!

    Just what that man deserved!

    Look for another chapter tonight or tomorrow morning!

Title: Heartless 06 Jan 2009 6:48 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for another great chapter! I am especially enjoying seeing Harry as a boy who is actually beginning to WANT a sister. Cool!

    Author's Response: You're welcome.  I thought it'd be nice for a change to have Harry want a sibling, he's ten and been an only child and beginning to want someone close to his own age to hang around with besides his friends.
Title: Heartless 06 Jan 2009 6:49 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it!

    Though I was complete horrified and disgusted with Lucius's behavior, as he completely broke that poor little girl's heart and acted unmorally, I’m glad things smoothed out in the end.

    Silver/Remus was brilliant! I cheered him on when he went after the great bastard :D I'm also glad Severus blasted him away and hope the protection withstands against Lucius's forces.

    Poor little Holly :( I felt like crying myself, she was so hurt and upset. I'm relived Severus could comfort and help her, and hope that she can be helped by that mind-healer too. Holly just doesn't deserve to feel how she did.

    I hope everyone has a good time in Diagon Ally this time around, but judging by your author's note I suppose their happy time will be cut terribly short. I just hate bullies, especially after having to suffer with them in school… Anyways, I look forward to reading more! ^_^

    Author's Response:

    Lucius is an awful awful man, but he will get his by the end of this fic.  What goes around comes around. 

    Sevs protection should hold, he's very very good at them.  Healer Keegan should be able to help Holly, gradually as will Severus and Harry.  No little girl should ever feel so tormented and useless.

    There will be some good parts to their visit but also some bad ones, as you'll see.  And I have my own history of bullies and have no tolerance for such things . . .it was what turned me off Sirius and James in the books, how they ruthlessly tortured Severus and never seemed to be made to pay for their actions and then shrugged it off as an adult.  It was so very wrong.  But this time won't be like that, promise!

Title: Heartless 06 Jan 2009 6:40 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww! It might be a little soon, logically, for the three of them to have bonded so fast, however with the extreme circumstances and your ability to write amazing stories, it works so well!

    Damn that Lucius. He is a horrible HORRIBLE person.

    Author's Response: Yes, it might seem as if it's moving swiftly, but Holly is in desperate need of someone, anyone to protect her from Lucius and she is also pitiful and you just can't help falling in love with her.  Lucius is wicked and he's not finished with them yet.  You'll see . . .there will be some major fireworks coming up . . .
Title: Heartless 06 Jan 2009 6:34 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww that was adorable! i love Sev with kids!

    Author's Response: Me too, which is one reason why he usually has at least one in my stories.

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