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Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events 28 Jan 2009 7:41 pm
Reviewer: Serenity Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Sev's and Holly's talk it reminds me the time my little five year old KK(she's not really mine, just the kid I babysit) took my makeup to her face. It was hilarious! She looked like a clone! LOL! Do ya know what happens next, clothes...lol...I wonder what type of headaches that will bring when Sev and her argue over what she can and can't wear!

    Author's Response: oh that's a good one, LOL! You're right, Sev's going to go insane once she's old enough and secure enough to have a good argument over clothes and . . .Merlin forbid . . .boys!
Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events 26 Jan 2009 5:37 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah that's a girl for you . . .one minute they're freaking out the next they're all sweetness and light. Poor Sev! He has NO idea what he's in for! I'd love to see him handle Holly as a teenager.

    Harry's typical for his age too, Sev definitely has his hands full and now he needs to help narcissa. Off to read the next one!

    Author's Response: Thanks and eventually Sev will figure that out . . .the hard way! I look forward to torturing him, LOL!
Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events 25 Jan 2009 11:20 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Harry has sense enough to follow Sev's rules.

    The part with Holly and the make-up was very funny. Sev's gonna have a heart attack when she reaches thirteen though!

    And Harry is very sweet to be so concerned over Holly.Good thing he wasn't hurt too badly.

    Author's Response:

    He should . . .for once!

    Yes, Severus might very have one . . .LOL!

    Harry takes his new role as big brother very seriously.

Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events 24 Jan 2009 6:07 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    The confrontation in the previous chapter was really good, I feel bad for Narcissa for having been hurt like that, but it’s good she found out abut the scandal and is smart enough to want to get away from Lucius and protect her child. Hopefully she can get custody of Draco, otherwise she'd be a nervous wreck.

    I thought it was funny when Sev sort of freaked out at seeing Holly with the make up. I remember when I started to want to try make-up out, and I was only allowed to wear lip-gloss as well, seeing as I was ten or eleven (good call, kids shouldn’t cover themselves in cosmetics). Though things started out a little rough, Sev handled things well with Holly and I'm glad she's happy with her appearance now.

    As for Harry’s latest escaped, what can I say? That kid always getting into a mess, lol (hope the owl's alright). This new situation just gives Snape another headache though, hehe, thing will definitely be different with two Malfoys around. But I agree that it'd be awkward if they moved in, so it'll be good for them to settle in their own rooms. I'm curious how the situation will go down and how everyone will react around each other, should they all meet.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, narcissa will do all in her power to get draco away from Lucius for good and between her and sev, they should be able to provide evidence that he is an unfit father. 

    Sev and Holly will have many more little spats, predictably when you deal with girls and boys too, but he tries hard and I think he'll learn as he goes.  Holly is much happier with her new look, and there will be changes for them once the Malfoys get there. 

    Harry is always getting hurt or something, that's just his nature.  Makes severus need to take Calming Drafts 24/7, poor guy!

Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events 23 Jan 2009 8:08 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! That was TOO funny! I loved that conversation. What about when she starts her period; Sev will be mortified! LOL!

    Ooh, I don't trust Lucius at all. Hope he doesn't find out where they are! Oh I'll be glad when Draco is away from Lucius. I was worried when Narcissa didn't take him with her.

    Author's Response:

    He will, heaven help him! get out the whiskey, Sev!

    Yes, you need to watch Lucius, he has a nasty scheme up his sleeve, but then when doesn't he?

    Narcissa couldn't take Draco away, Lucius would have killed her.  So she's playing decoy until she can speak to Severus and ask him for help.

    Speaking of which, that chapter is now posted!

Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events 23 Jan 2009 4:24 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you continue this to a full length story. I love the development of the relationship between Sev, Holly and Harry, and would love to see how you write the meeting of Holly, Draco & Narcissa.

    Thanks for a great chapter!
    Donna

    Author's Response: I will be making this a novel, since I have too much to write about to fit in one small short story.  You will definitely see a meeting between the Malfoys and Holly, but first they have to rescue Draco from Lucius. 
Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events 23 Jan 2009 6:54 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awww that was great! lol i loved how Sev freaked out about the makeup lol at least he didn't have to have THE TALK with her/them

    Author's Response:

    Now wouldn't THAT have been hilarious! LOL!

    And it still may happen, if I continue with another sequel.


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