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Title: Meetings 08 Feb 2009 5:39 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad the first meeting went well and hopefully they'll all get along. But then again, this is Harry and Draco we're talking about. Waiting for the next chapter anxiously. Update soon, I want to see Cross get it.

    Author's Response: Okay and now you can read it.  As for Draco and Harry, yes, there will be small arguments and such.
Title: Meetings 07 Feb 2009 2:04 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this one! Can't wait to see the ceremony and the ending of this was adorable!

    Author's Response: Thanks, and I've updated.  The ending was really sweet to write.
Title: Meetings 07 Feb 2009 5:47 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    The meeting between the Snapes and Malfoys seemed to go rather well, no one broke any teeth anyway, lol. Seriously though, I'm glad there hasn't been any fights yet, though there surely will be some in the future.

    It was very nice of the kids to visit Filch and give him those presents. Clearly that was a new experience for him, I'm sure he appreciates that there are some kind children around. Hopefully he'll recover relatively soon.

    I’m glad Holly was reassured that she still has someone whom cares about her, regardless of minor mistakes. I can’t help but agree with what she and Harry said about Throcmorten though, hehe. Anyway, I hope the kids have a fine time ice skating and am interested to see how the expulsion goes. Hope to read more soon as always!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, there will be, but without too much bitterness, obviously, since they don't have a past to live down like they do in the books.

    Filch will be recovering fairly soon and was quite touched by Harry and Holly's thoughtfulness, as that wasa first for him.

    Yes, Throckmorton really is evil and the expulsion is now posted so you can read it.

Title: Meetings 06 Feb 2009 11:04 pm
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think the conversation was were it need it be. BBBBUT Cliffhanger really but well done by putting the cliffhanger in the author notes.

    Author's Response: Thanks and the next one's up, BTW.
Title: Meetings 06 Feb 2009 10:52 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    awww *melts*
    good chapter, as always, Snapegirl.
    this fic is a bit more holly-centric lately, i wonder if we will see more of harry's POV soon?

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry will be getting a few more chapters soon, he'll have plenty to say to Draco in the next chapter!  And you'll see more of Throck-moron as well and Sev spying on the wicked one. Oh yes, and Lucius too, I haven't forgotten about him.
Title: Meetings 06 Feb 2009 4:32 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter!I really enjoyed the initial meeting between Holly, Harry & Draco. I hope that Harry gets past his jealousy quickly and realizes he can share Holly with Draco, and maybe he'll get a brother in the process.

    Author's Response: he will, eventually, once he trusts that Draco won't hurt Holly.  But it'll take a little getting used to. 
Title: Meetings 06 Feb 2009 4:06 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter!

    I'm curious...where are Harry and Holly (the names go together—that's cute :D) picking up these bad words? In my experience, kids don't tend to have language problems unless they're hearing it on a regular basis. If it keeps being an issue, I think Snape should track down whomever is using the words and tell them to knock it off (while the kids are around, at any rate.) Oh, well, just my two cents. Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: yes, they do, and I didn't realize that till you pointed it out to me! :) As for the language problem, Holly lived on the streets of Diagon Alley for a while, and probably heard all kinds of crude language, especially aimed at her because she was a Squib.  Harry probably heard bad language while wandering Hogwarts, some teens have nasty mouths and he would have picked it up that way.  But Severus will keep a handle on it, never fear.   
Title: Meetings 06 Feb 2009 2:16 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent writing, as usual. I really want to string up Throckmorton like he did Argus. Good interaction between all the kids. Kudos, friend.

    Author's Response: me too.  I have something very nasty and fitting for him, however.  Glad you liked all the kids.  You'll see the wand-breaking ceremony next and the outing at the lake.  It should be fun to write the next one, since I've never read about an expulsion ceremony anywhere, and that means I've got leave to create a whole new scenario.  Should be very interesting . . .
Title: Meetings 06 Feb 2009 9:42 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awww that was so sweet! Sev is just so perfect with them!

    Author's Response: Yeah, he's trying his best.  And doing a pretty good job of it, right?

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