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Title: The Lesson 05 Mar 2009 3:33 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like you used Filch for more than a grumbling bush in your story. Mila

    Author's Response: Yes, i wanted Filch to have a major part in the story, since it's main character was also a Squib.  I thought it only fair that Argus get to participate in the ceremony, since he was the one wronged and it showed the other students that he was important to the school and not just the janitor.  Also I wanted to write a kind of background for him, to see what made him tick, so to speak. 
Title: The Lesson 12 Feb 2009 9:09 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Now they are in serious trouble!

    Give it to them Snape!

    Loved the ceremony, Cross got what he deserved.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, they are.

    Thanks for reading!

Title: The Lesson 12 Feb 2009 2:30 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked the ceremony, very unique and for once somebody actually got what was coming to them. Argus's role was perfect.

    Sev should nail those troublemakers to a wall in his dungeon. I can't stand animal abusers or any abusers. Well, onto the next one!

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'mg glad you like it and I agree with you about people who abuse animals and children or anyone.
Title: The Lesson 10 Feb 2009 8:54 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    oooo that was great i hope Sev lays into them

    Author's Response: He will! read all about it now!
Title: The Lesson 09 Feb 2009 7:35 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The shattering ceremony was the perfect mixture of pageantry and shunning and Argus' role was perfect.

    I think Pritchard is in for a terms worth of detentions with Argus and Sev in the very least.

    I think Holly has a new pet.

    Now, will Harry let Draco off with an apology to Holly since Draco is coming forward to protect his half-sister? So many questions...

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, and those boys are going to get it, trust me! And not just from Sev either . . .

    The kitten may indeed become Holly's pet.

    As for Draco and Harry, you can find out now, I've updated!

Title: The Lesson 09 Feb 2009 5:59 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    The Ceremony was very creative, props to you! As for Filch's role, I was wondering whom was going to do it and your decision makes sense, he deserved to 'do the honors'.

    Those horrid students clearly have neither brains, nor hearts. That poor kitten! *sobs* Holly was brave to try and stop them from abusing it, but it‘s a good thing the others showed up or the bullys could have really hurt her. Those fools SO deserve what's coming to them! The wrath of Snape will be something to behold, hehe. (BTW, I have a hunch Holly will get to keep the kitten :D If so, I wonder what she'll name it?)

    Draco needs to watch himself. Though I'm glad he decided to help Holly and Harry in the end, it really was terrible for him to insult Holly, even if it was a slip of the tongue. If the re-race is still on, I'll be cheering for Harry, so he can show the other boy a thing or two!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I tried very hard to come up with something different and I had to include Argus, it just felt right for him to have a pivotal role and show the school that he's good for something other than scrubbing floors. 

    yes, those kids are idiots, and Snape will make them suffer.  As for what the kitten gets named, read the next chapter, since I've posted it.

    Draco does need to watch his mouth, but you'll see what happens to him as well next chapter.

Title: The Lesson 08 Feb 2009 11:43 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, the expulsion ceremony was really harsh. I'm surprised. But I guess what Cross did to Filch was also serious.

    So at the end did Draco actually defend his sister? That was so cute.

    I love that they're scared of Snape. Hurry and update, I'm really anxious to see those troublemakers get their just deserts! LOL

    Author's Response:

    Yes, but it served as an example to the students of what NOT to do, and considering that Cross doesn't really feel remorse over what he did to Filch, Dumbledore wished to drive th epoint home that what he did was terribly wrong.

    Yes, draco did indeed defend Holly and would have probably helped Harry fight those bullies if Silver and Severus hadn't come along.

    Scared of Snape . . .petrified is more like it . . .and well they should be  . . .hahahaha!  They'll be getting theirs, all right!

Title: The Lesson 08 Feb 2009 1:44 pm
Reviewer: studiohq (Signed) [Report This]
    Did you just make that kid pee on himself?

    Well now...What is Draco to do? Kinda confusing for him. HE can call his sister what he wants...others can't...typical Draco. Plus he'll work it out in the end. You've done a WONDERFUL job with this...not only will Draco be able to accept Hermione in the future, but he wasn't raised with the blood feud so he can even accept the Weasleys...goodness knows I shudder to think of Draco and the Twins hitting it off...He wouldn't be nasty but I still see those prankster genes kicking in...

    I think the teachers would jump off of a cliff with all of THOSE kids getting along...

    My brain goes crazy with it...Hermione and Holly....Lord Help the boys...I think in regarding the girls brain power ALONE the boys would be out classed.....

    Argus...got his moment...as it always should have been. When my family did our own RPG...Argus was the man cause he knew all of the secrets...

    Author's Response:

    Uh, probably, LOL!

    Yes, Draco still has some issues to resolve, and actually his attitude towards his sister is typical of older brothers.  My nephew used to tease his younger siblings and boss them around something awful, but heaven help anyone else outside of the family that tried anything with HIS siblings.  They were dead meat.  When I asked him why it was that he could do whatever he wanted to his brother and sister, he just said, "I'm family, and that's how it is."

    Oh God, could you imagine, Draco and Fred and George together? The staff would have a collective nervous breakdown. 

    Yes, the girls would be genuiuses and probably plan out some of the boys pranks, unwittingly, of course. 

    Yes, he did indeed, for fair is fair, and he is the man, all right.

Title: The Lesson 08 Feb 2009 8:04 am
Reviewer: Glamorbaby2011 (Signed) [Report This]
    I cant to see what happens to those trouble makers . update soon

    Author's Response: I will and here's a hint . . .it will NOT be pleasant.

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