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Title: Rescuing Magik 13 Feb 2009 3:22 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    I definitely think the punishments sound appropriate, and the idea of having them work at that humane society-like place was a good idea. Maybe they'll actually grow some compassion..

    I'm glad the children are getting along, makes things easier for the parents and it's nice that they have a friendship. I can't wait for Magik to make a full recovery and hope Severus lets Holly keep her. I'm sure he will, just one look into those pleading sapphire eyes and he'd hand her the world :)

    I'll cross my finger and wish the professor luck in catching that dastardly Throckmorton!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, i felt that it was necessary to not just give them regular detention (though with Snape it's anything but ordinary) but to actually make them go somewhere and learn something. 

    You're right about that, she can wrap him around her finger quite easily with one glance from those eyes . . .if she only realized it.  Well, someday she will.

    And Severus will be hunting Throckie next, and you know nothing gets past Sev.

Title: Rescuing Magik 12 Feb 2009 9:21 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Good job with the punishments, I would have expelled them.

    Loved the way Draco is now part of the family, and I hope Sev lets Holly keep Magik.

    Author's Response:

    Actually, I thought about it.  But then I decided no, expulsion is rare, and they wouldn't do it for what could be considered a cruel prank, after all the Marauders were never expelled for what they did to Severus. So they have detention with Snape, which could be considered worse than expulsion . . .LOL.

    I'm glad Draco is part of their family too and as for Magik , you'll see.

Title: Rescuing Magik 12 Feb 2009 9:38 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awww that aws adorable i love how they are all getting along :)

    Author's Response: Thanks, I love it when family gets together.
Title: Rescuing Magik 12 Feb 2009 2:32 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh yes, they were all correct and hopefully they;ll have learned a good lesson.

    I'm so glad all the kids are getting along. I like now that Holly has 2 brothers. Keep it up!

    Author's Response:

    They should, it's not like they don't have decent role models.

    Holly's two brothers will be able to protect her, or get her into mischief too! Thanks!

Title: Rescuing Magik 12 Feb 2009 12:47 am
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I believe the punishment fits the deed. It is a know fact that Serial killers started by killing animals.

    Author's Response: Yes, that is true.  And it gives me the creeps just thinking about that.
Title: Rescuing Magik 11 Feb 2009 6:31 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I knew that they'd be in big trouble. Serves them right. I just can't abide by cruelty to animals! I'm even a vegetarian. .

    Great chapter. I'm so please that they are all getting along, and that Draco is recognizing Holly as his sibling! Very cute! Can't wait for more.

    Author's Response:

    Neither can I.  Used to volunteer at a humane society and some of the poor things . . .ah, I won't go there.

    Yes, the kids are finally getting along, although they will quarrel on occasion, it won't be too bad.

Title: Rescuing Magik 11 Feb 2009 4:47 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I certainly hope Severus kicks his arse big time!

    Author's Response: Oh he will, I promise you!  And not only that, something else bad happens too.
Title: Rescuing Magik 11 Feb 2009 4:46 pm
Reviewer: studiohq (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great chapter, I knew the kids would work it out;D.

    The punishment fits the crime. You've done a really good job leveling the playing field on the "Houses" at Hogwarts.

    Me and the kids have always picked them apart and looked beyond the obvious.

    When the 7 of us RPG'ed we sorted in a most interesting way,

    3 Gryf
    1 Rav
    1 Sly
    2 Huf

    Yea I sorted into Huf...I'm an ass, and liked the hidden quality's of the house. You could be yourself with backup. I think it was the term "All the rest..." that we liked the most.

    She did a comic strip inspired by "There she is" a youtube animation video. Based on her character (Quigley) having a crush on Sev...LOL Poor guy...Her character had Snape Dolls,Posters all on a shrine... And God help ANYONE who touched it... I'll have to upload the strip on Deviant art one day but it was dead cute...

    Throckmorton had BETTER HOPE he doesn't get caught! I don't think the results would be very pretty.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks.  I always felt Slytherin got the short end of the stick, since it was the House that Voldy came from and had a bad rep for that, plus they were the ambitious House, which is a quality that some people look down on, and had a snake for their symbol, which can sometimes be seen as being an "evil" animal.  And I think a lot of people overlooked the fact that Peter pettigrew--a Death Eater--was in gryffindor--so they're not all perfect.  I suppose it was assumed that because the Golden trio was in Gryffindor, it was the "good" House, but the Marauders were horrid bullies and I'd like to know how the heck they changed from tormenting students to suddenly being defenders of the weak.  It always got me that it was never explained, because in my experience, kids who bully grow up to be bullies unless something happens to make them totally have an attitude adjustment. 

    I think it would have been better if JKR had made Harry have friends from ALL the Houses, so then you could see that there was good and bad in each House. 

    As for Throckie, well he's going down.  Be assured of that one, because no one escapes Snape!  Working on the next chapter now!


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