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Title: Fire Seeing 05 Mar 2009 5:39 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no, this is terrible! Please find a way to save Holly, she doesn't deserve to die. Update soon!

    Author's Response: Okay, I'll try.  And I've updated!
Title: Fire Seeing 05 Mar 2009 5:14 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, though I hope she doesn't die. I mean in the first vision she saw everyone die, but in the second, she didn't SEE herself get killed, so maybe it won't happen. I loved how Sev hugged her too and I still don't know who sent the notes.

    Author's Response:

    you'll find out if you're right soon and the author of the notes will be revealed next chapter.

Title: Fire Seeing 05 Mar 2009 4:11 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I think she saw true. It would be cruel to taint her only magic gift. Only there will be some unseen twist or interpretation. Mila

    Author's Response: Yes, you're right, and eventually you'll see what that is.  :)
Title: Fire Seeing 05 Mar 2009 3:58 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! What DID Holly see?

    Harry is so protective of Holly, isn't he. That's so sweet. I'm so curious now about what she saw.

    Author's Response:

    She saw first her and her brothers getting hunted by a pack of hounds and a hunting party of ghost and they killed all of them.

    The next vision she had wa sof herself running from the hunters and them catching her and, well, she died. 

    She had to make  achoice between two possible futures and she chose the second one, reasoning that way only one of them would die, and since she considers herself expendable . . .

    Harry is even more protective of Holly than usual due to the notes' influence. 

Title: Fire Seeing 04 Mar 2009 9:00 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Is it just me, or is this vision the same as Sev's dream when he was sick? (that’s my assumption anyway). I really hope there’s some catch to Holly's vision, it did after all end before she saw herself killed. So, I'm just going to hold onto the hope that somehow she'll be saved :). Poor kid though, it stinks that she feels she has to suffer alone, so she doesn’t bring the others down with her (both literarily and figuratively).

    I'm still wondering whom’s sending Holly and Harry those horrid notes. It doesn't really 'sound' like Lucius, though he may have someone else sending them. Clearly though, they’re trying to break up the family.

    Winning the poll eh? Seems Lucius will be emerging from the shadows to spread more misery in people’s lives... It's a hobby of his, really ;D

    Author's Response:

    No, you're right, Sev's dream and Holly's vision are eerily similar, scary isn't it? And no, Sev isn't a seer also, but perhaps he just had a premonition.  You're the first one to notice that little connection, yay!

    yes, poor Holly she is a captive to her own gift sometimes, like many a Seer before her.  But what you pointed out was true, in the second vision she doesn't actually see herself get killed, so maybe there's a different interpretation. 

    The notes' author will be revealed in the next chapter, posted now! And yes, they're a deliberate attempt to mess with the kids' heads and destroy their peace of mind and drive Severus crazy trying to figure out what's up with his children.

    Oh yes, Lucius lives to spread misery, much like his dark master, at least in this fic he does.


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