Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Cruel Joke 25 Jan 2009 6:49 pm
Reviewer: studiohq (Signed) [Report This]
    Albus needs to make an example of SOMEBODY!

    I really like the relationship between Harry and Holly! He takes his big brother role seriously...God help the poor sap that tries to date Holly. ;D

    Author's Response:

    He's going to, trust me!

    yeah, whoever that is might as well start running now, because between harry, Severus and Draco, the kid is going to be lucky to put a foot in the door and say hi before being chewed up and spit out. 

Title: Cruel Joke 25 Jan 2009 11:42 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww the water fight was sweet! But poor Filch! I'm glad the kids got DD but man, whoever did that to Filch is going to be on a one way trip out of the school!

    Author's Response: Yup, he sure will be and you'll be finding out who it was in two chapters.
Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events 25 Jan 2009 11:20 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope Harry has sense enough to follow Sev's rules.

    The part with Holly and the make-up was very funny. Sev's gonna have a heart attack when she reaches thirteen though!

    And Harry is very sweet to be so concerned over Holly.Good thing he wasn't hurt too badly.

    Author's Response:

    He should . . .for once!

    Yes, Severus might very have one . . .LOL!

    Harry takes his new role as big brother very seriously.

Title: Cruel Joke 25 Jan 2009 7:51 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    What a horrid thing to do! Poor old Mr. Filch, that's no prank, that’s borderline harassment and cruelty. I'm not sure, but I'm guessing that vile DADA Professor had something to do with this...

    Whoever is responsible should have their wand snapped, be banished from the school, and ... be shaved bald (lol)! I'm glad Mrs. Norris could get to the kids in time, who knows what might have happened if that cat and the headmaster hadn't come to the care-taker's rescue?

    I look forward to seeing the wrath of Dumbledore unleashed on the creep, and finding out how Snape’s rescue mission will go.

    Author's Response:

    It is and you're right, Throckmorton encouraged it.

    The one who actually did it will be punished, have no fear! Albus is very angry.

    Severus's rescue mission is coming up, so keep an eye out. Thanks for R&R ing!

Title: Cruel Joke 25 Jan 2009 7:15 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    The DADA idiot, of course. Ooooo and when Albus and Severus discover who did it... I hope he knows to run for the hills.

    Author's Response: He is behind it . . .but he's sneaky, they're gonna have to prove it and that won't be easy.  But he'll get his eventually.
Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events 24 Jan 2009 6:07 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    The confrontation in the previous chapter was really good, I feel bad for Narcissa for having been hurt like that, but it’s good she found out abut the scandal and is smart enough to want to get away from Lucius and protect her child. Hopefully she can get custody of Draco, otherwise she'd be a nervous wreck.

    I thought it was funny when Sev sort of freaked out at seeing Holly with the make up. I remember when I started to want to try make-up out, and I was only allowed to wear lip-gloss as well, seeing as I was ten or eleven (good call, kids shouldn’t cover themselves in cosmetics). Though things started out a little rough, Sev handled things well with Holly and I'm glad she's happy with her appearance now.

    As for Harry’s latest escaped, what can I say? That kid always getting into a mess, lol (hope the owl's alright). This new situation just gives Snape another headache though, hehe, thing will definitely be different with two Malfoys around. But I agree that it'd be awkward if they moved in, so it'll be good for them to settle in their own rooms. I'm curious how the situation will go down and how everyone will react around each other, should they all meet.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, narcissa will do all in her power to get draco away from Lucius for good and between her and sev, they should be able to provide evidence that he is an unfit father. 

    Sev and Holly will have many more little spats, predictably when you deal with girls and boys too, but he tries hard and I think he'll learn as he goes.  Holly is much happier with her new look, and there will be changes for them once the Malfoys get there. 

    Harry is always getting hurt or something, that's just his nature.  Makes severus need to take Calming Drafts 24/7, poor guy!

Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events 23 Jan 2009 8:08 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! That was TOO funny! I loved that conversation. What about when she starts her period; Sev will be mortified! LOL!

    Ooh, I don't trust Lucius at all. Hope he doesn't find out where they are! Oh I'll be glad when Draco is away from Lucius. I was worried when Narcissa didn't take him with her.

    Author's Response:

    He will, heaven help him! get out the whiskey, Sev!

    Yes, you need to watch Lucius, he has a nasty scheme up his sleeve, but then when doesn't he?

    Narcissa couldn't take Draco away, Lucius would have killed her.  So she's playing decoy until she can speak to Severus and ask him for help.

    Speaking of which, that chapter is now posted!

Title: Narcissa's Discovery 23 Jan 2009 7:00 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! That was great. Sock it to him Narcissa!

    I would love to see more interaction between Holly and Draco definitely!

    Author's Response:

    I quite agree! Lucius could use several good hard punches to various portions of his anatomy!

    Holly and Draco will meet in a future chapter!

Title: The Other Squib 23 Jan 2009 6:15 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Filch was actually nice!

    I love DD's conversation with Throckmorton! Yikes, what a mouthful THAT name is!

    Author's Response:

    yes, Filch has a different side to him here, because he understands where Holly is coming from and she isn't interested in pranking him like some of the other students. 

    Isn't it though? Found that name in an old book on British history.

Title: A Bit of Tension 23 Jan 2009 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hee hee DD is so sneaky!
    Good for Harry sticking up for Holly.

    I was worried that he would get in trouble with Snape for being disrepectful to an adult! I'm glad that Snape wasn't mad at him.

    Author's Response:

    That's Albus for you! By hook or by crook, he'll get sweets to kids. 

    No, Sev cannot STAND Throckmorton, as I'm sure you've guessed and he's willing to overlook a little rudeness on harry's part especially given the fact that the teacher was warned twice to leave the kids alone. And it wasn't like Harry swore at him or anything.


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