| Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events
| 23 Jan 2009 4:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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I hope you continue this to a full length story. I love the development of the relationship between Sev, Holly and Harry, and would love to see how you write the meeting of Holly, Draco & Narcissa.
Thanks for a great chapter!
Donna
Author's Response: I will be making this a novel, since I have too much to write about to fit in one small short story. You will definitely see a meeting between the Malfoys and Holly, but first they have to rescue Draco from Lucius.
| Title: An Unexpected Turn of Events
| 23 Jan 2009 6:54 am
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| Reviewer: toast (Signed)
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awww that was great! lol i loved how Sev freaked out about the makeup lol at least he didn't have to have THE TALK with her/them
Author's Response: Now wouldn't THAT have been hilarious! LOL! And it still may happen, if I continue with another sequel.
| Title: Narcissa's Discovery
| 23 Jan 2009 2:55 am
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| Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous)
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I really liked your take on Narcissa! A strong woman for once, and it seems as if there is a chance for Daraco to turn out right as well - I like that! It's not the usual way either, Draco is still young and not so set in his believes so he might actually be a brother to Holly at some point?
Very nice chapter! I like strong women! (maybe she would do well with Severus? didn't she want to go out with him at school? so, do I see a dream family in the making? Daddy Sev, mummy Cissa amd the three happy kids Harry, Draco and Holly? well just a guess and maybe a suggestion)
Author's Response: Yes, there is a very good chance for draco to become yet another brother for Holly . . .once he gets over a slight attitude problem. As for Sev and Narcissa, you'll have to wait and see, I make no promises yet. But thank you for the suggestion.
| Title: Narcissa's Discovery
| 22 Jan 2009 11:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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I really like your portrayal of Narcissa, she's very much her own person here and not Lucius's shadow. Loved the chapter, keep going please! And I'd love to see Draco meet his sister.
Author's Response: I wanted to make Narcissa a little different here, Lucius needs to be brought down a peg or fifty. Draco will meet Holly, in a few more chapters.
Go Narcissa! That's the way to tell him off! And Draco, good for you too. At least some of the Malfoys have a conscience.
Author's Response: True, I wanted to present them as not being all bad.
| Title: Narcissa's Discovery
| 22 Jan 2009 5:06 am
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| Reviewer: lilylove (Anonymous)
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to answer your questions: yes, yes and MERLIN HELL YES! i'd also like to see narcissa meet holly i can see alot of narcissa in holly. a certain grace if you will. i think this narcissa would like holly sinclair snape
Author's Response: Okay, I will have them meet, not sure just yet when it will happen, though I have a rough idea, but I'll have to see how things go. Sev tends to order me around a lot. I agree with you about Narcissa liking Holly.
| Title: Narcissa's Discovery
| 21 Jan 2009 6:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous)
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Hmm, actually I think Narcissa might be an interesting addition to the burgeoning Snape family, along with Draco. Really tweak Lucius' nose, eh?
Author's Response: yes, indeed it would bend his nose all out of joint, LOL1 And serve him right too! But we'll see. There is a lot more that must happen before they have leisure to forge a relationship.
| Title: Narcissa's Discovery
| 21 Jan 2009 5:20 pm
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| Reviewer: LorienWillow (Anonymous)
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This was a great chapter! The backbone of Narcissa and the potential for good in Draco just made my day. Am interested in seeing Holly meet both Narcissa and Draco - would be interesting if the two families (Snape and Narcissa) somehow ended up together. Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Holly will meet her relatives fairly soon, as for Cissy and Sev getting together, we'll see. Glad you liked my Narcissa and Draco.
| Title: Narcissa's Discovery
| 21 Jan 2009 4:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Poirot (Signed)
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Great chapter! I would love to see Draco and Holly meet.
I think Narcissa should immediately go to Severus and explain her situation. They can gather evidence against Lucius!
Author's Response: They will, eventually. Narcissa has to get Draco away from malfoy Manor first. Narcissa will be seeing Severus very soon and they will work together against Lucius. Thanks for reading!
| Title: Narcissa's Discovery
| 21 Jan 2009 11:18 am
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| Reviewer: Lucas (Anonymous)
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Hi, I have read your story and I would like to see Draco and Holly meet each other. I don't like Lucius and hope he won't try to kill Narcissa. Please add more to the story soon. I want to know what happens next.
Author's Response: Okay, that will probably happen before the end of this fic. Lucius is very sly and he has plans for his wife that she won't like at all. I'll try and update soon! Thank you.
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