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Title: Diagon Alley Disaster 11 Jan 2009 12:20 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Good going Harry! But Severus needs to talk to Holly and make sure she knows she's wanted there.

    Author's Response: Right and he will, thanks for reading!
Title: Wanted 10 Jan 2009 4:57 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent! I like Healer Sue - now, once we get Holly fixed up we need to find someone for Sev.

    Author's Response: We do indeed, those kids need a mother and Sev could use a good woman.  I'm working on that!
Title: Wanted 10 Jan 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    Woot! Happy Birthday Sev! ... Oh, and a wonderful chapter too ;) I really like this Sue. She sounds like a nice lady who can really help Holly. Holly's birthday being on Christmas is a cute idea - I had been under the impression that she was 10 years old until this chapter, but if I'm not mistake she just barely turned 9?

    Btw, I'm currently reading The Chronicles of Narnia for the first time (I'm only about 15 years late...) and so it really made me smile to see that Harry is reading the same book as me :D

    Author's Response: Yes, she's just nine and I love Narnia, I read them over and over, they are one of my favorites series.  I have a friend Holly who has the same birthday. I figured Harry would enjoy Narnia too!
Title: Wanted 10 Jan 2009 8:05 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awwww this was awesome

    Author's Response: Thanks so much.  I'll be posting again soon!
Title: Wanted 10 Jan 2009 7:47 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    It was sad to read Holly's paper to Sev, the poor kid's self-worth is utterly crushed. Though she and Harry got in trouble for fighting those horrid bullies, I'm glad they could teach the jerks a lesson!

    It's great that she will be able to slowly heal now, talking about things that upset us is hard, but it does help. Healer Susan seems like a capable woman, not to mention very kind. Silver appears to be lending a hand (or paw) too :)

    I look forward to reading more!

    P.S. Mmm cake! One of my favorite kinds too ^_^ lol

    Author's Response:

    So was I and I loved it when my brother did the same thing for me when I was in middle school.

    Sue is a very good Healer and she will help Holly immensely.  And so will Silver, he's like a therapy wolf--instead of a dog!

    There will be more to come soon!

Title: Diagon Alley Disaster 09 Jan 2009 4:42 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    GO HARRY! Big brothers rock :D And brothers in general, of course. I do think Severus was right in punishing them for fighting, even if it was for a good reason. But, I do feel terrible for Holly. I can only imagine how terrified she must be - I mean, a mere few days in someone's home and you're already grounded, lol. Poor girl, lol.

    LOVED it!

    Author's Response:

    They do, mine did much the same thing when I was in school, he threatened to pulverize a kid who was harrassing me continuously and making me miserable.

    The kids did deserve to be punished, and though Holly knows that logically, she is still a very damaged and insecure child who will need reassurance and counseling in order to heal. 

Title: Diagon Alley Disaster 09 Jan 2009 2:56 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! Those nasty kids need to be taught a lesson and I wish Sev had been there to scare the daylights out of them. I hope he gets that Healer to counsel her and keeps Lucius away from her.

    Author's Response: Me too, but I wanted Harry to have his chance to shine here.  Sev will do his best to protect Holly, as always.
Title: Heartless 09 Jan 2009 2:42 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Holly!

    Damn that heartless Lucius! I loved it when Silver bit him.

    Severus needs to get her some professional help soon!

    Author's Response: Me too and you're right, he does need to get her help and he will!
Title: Diagon Alley Disaster 08 Jan 2009 3:12 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Right there with Harry (and Severus) with hating bulllies and bigots. The wizarding world was not a good or nice place.

    I wonder if this is the behavior Filch was treated that way as a child and that is the reason he became so bitter.

    So, if you are a wizard or witch with no magical parents, you are looked down upon or if you are a child or magic but have no magic, you are looked down upon. And house elves are just used. Apparently there is only a few wizards that are approved of.

    I like Tasha, Maybe she will work her womanly wiles on our Severus. He has been alone too long.

    Author's Response:

    No, it has its share of prejudice just like our own.

    Yes, I;d say that Filch was treated very similarly to this.  As a matter of fact he will have an appearance later on in the story, I think Dumbledore, no matter how well-meaning, did him no favors making him the handyman of Hogwarts, where he is forever reminded of lacking magic and sneered at by the students for being in a menial position.  It would be easy to see how that would make one bitter.

    Interesting idea about Tasha and who knows, she might just get up the nerve to ask Sev out.  We'll see.

Title: Diagon Alley Disaster 08 Jan 2009 3:01 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    The fight was brilliant. The only thing that I would,ve liked better was if Shadow could have taken a bite out of their asses!

    As always, great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    You mean Silver, right?

    And I'd have liked that too, maybe next time someone starts something, Silver will teach them a good lesson too.


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