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Title: Comfort and Hope 01 Jan 2009 12:09 am
Reviewer: Kathleen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please continue, i like your stories especially the long ones.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm hoping to post another chapter today, if I have time to write it.  This one might not be as long as previous ones.
Title: Comfort and Hope 31 Dec 2008 2:00 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Duh, duh, duh duhnh! Excellent so far, I really like the characters - hey, does silver still talk on Xmas eve each year or was that a once off? Just curious.

    Author's Response: Yes, Silver still recieves the gift of human speech every Christmas Eve, as does every animal who requests it from Father Christmas.  Get ready for Lucius, he's coming soon!
Title: Awakening 31 Dec 2008 7:21 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, I had a feeling it was Lucius, the evil twit! he deserves to be eaten by wolves. I hope Sev decides to adopt Holly, the poor kid needs a decent man in her life. Update soon.

    Author's Response: I agree and as for Sev adopting Holly, well you never know.
Title: Awakening 30 Dec 2008 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! Malfoy's love child! Too funny!

    OOh, he is a horrible man to treat his own child that way! But then again...this is Malfoy that we're talking about!

    Author's Response: And no, Narcissa doesn't know, of course.  He is a wicked man, but at least Holly has Severus and Harry to defend her now.
Title: Awakening 30 Dec 2008 5:11 pm
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Holly. Love her introduction to the Snape family. Another great story. Looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Thanks, and the next chapter has been posted so you can check it out.
Title: Awakening 30 Dec 2008 4:50 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've never heard the tale of the little Matchstick girl.

    My apologies.

    I didn't think you'd reveal Lucius as her father so quickly. I'm sure it's definitely a shocker to those who weren't expecting it. ::winks:: As with your other OCs I love Holly. I take it Sev adopts her as well?

    Update soon, darling.

    Author's Response:

    It's a good story, you shoul read it.  But it's also very sad.

    I decided to reveal Lucius as her father early on, since he's going to be a major bad guy and Sev needs to know what he's dealing with here.

    As for the adoption . . .why wouldn't he adopt her?

Title: Awakening 30 Dec 2008 3:00 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahhhhhhh, that was sweet.

    Figured it was Malfoy. Severus is collecting quite the little family.

    I always wondered why it was horrible to say "mudblood" but saying "squib" was just fine.

    Author's Response: I don't know, seems to me both terms are racist and should be condemned.  You can read more about Sev's opinion in the next chapter which has been updated.
Title: Awakening 30 Dec 2008 10:16 am
Reviewer: Mikee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting chapter. I figured early on in the chapter that Holly's 'father' was Lucius. I was both glad that I was right, and sorry that I was. I can't say why I was sorry, except to think that no little girl should be saddled with that jerk as a father. It's obvious he was only -- pardon the expression -- the sperm-donar.

    Oh well ...

    I quite liked how Severus and Harry -- and 'Silver' were so supportive of her. I'm hoping they'll adopt her, but for some reason, I'm afraid this is going to have a sad ending. I hope I'm wrong, and that that fear is just a carry over after the trauma of Lily's death in your earlier story.

    I'm quite looking forward to seeing what you do next.

    Thank you.

    Author's Response:

    Well, you'll just have to wait and see about this ending, I'm not sure exactly how it will end yet.

    Lucius really is an awful person here and he is exactly what you said. 

    You can see more about how they react to one another in this next chapter.

Title: Awakening 30 Dec 2008 8:23 am
Reviewer: Caramello (Signed) [Report This]
    I. Hate. Lucius Malfoy. What a horrible person he is! In AND outside of canon. *Growls* It WOULD be like him to be this uncaring. Ugh, but alas, you write wonderful stories, so I'm thrilled to see this updated so soon! Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: He really is awful! I'll try and have a new chapter posted soon.
Title: Once Upon a Winter's Night . . . 30 Dec 2008 2:13 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great beginning I'm so happy you posted a sequel. I love the Little Match Girl and can't wait to see what happens with Holly and who her dad is--must be a real creep.

    Author's Response: He is a very nasty man as you'll see when you read the next chapter, which is posted now.

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