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Title: Fire Seeing 04 Mar 2009 9:00 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Is it just me, or is this vision the same as Sev's dream when he was sick? (that’s my assumption anyway). I really hope there’s some catch to Holly's vision, it did after all end before she saw herself killed. So, I'm just going to hold onto the hope that somehow she'll be saved :). Poor kid though, it stinks that she feels she has to suffer alone, so she doesn’t bring the others down with her (both literarily and figuratively).

    I'm still wondering whom’s sending Holly and Harry those horrid notes. It doesn't really 'sound' like Lucius, though he may have someone else sending them. Clearly though, they’re trying to break up the family.

    Winning the poll eh? Seems Lucius will be emerging from the shadows to spread more misery in people’s lives... It's a hobby of his, really ;D

    Author's Response:

    No, you're right, Sev's dream and Holly's vision are eerily similar, scary isn't it? And no, Sev isn't a seer also, but perhaps he just had a premonition.  You're the first one to notice that little connection, yay!

    yes, poor Holly she is a captive to her own gift sometimes, like many a Seer before her.  But what you pointed out was true, in the second vision she doesn't actually see herself get killed, so maybe there's a different interpretation. 

    The notes' author will be revealed in the next chapter, posted now! And yes, they're a deliberate attempt to mess with the kids' heads and destroy their peace of mind and drive Severus crazy trying to figure out what's up with his children.

    Oh yes, Lucius lives to spread misery, much like his dark master, at least in this fic he does.

Title: Without A Trace 02 Mar 2009 6:26 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Sev! First a migraine, then a nightmare and then he's sick on top of it. But at least he has Sue to take care of him. Those notes are creepy, I wonder what's going on with them?

    Author's Response: And that's a very good thing! The notes a re very creepy and you'll find out what's up with them in a furure chapter.
Title: Without A Trace 02 Mar 2009 2:53 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I love Sue and how she handled the sick Severus, she knows him so well!

    Poor Holly and Harry, those notes seemed to be charmed as well as nasty, but I don't know who could be sending them. Maybe Lucius?

    Author's Response: yes, she knows him well, she's been his therapist as well as his friend for many years.  As for the author of the notes, you'll find out eventually.
Title: Without A Trace 01 Mar 2009 11:55 pm
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    ooo this is great i can't wait to read more

    Author's Response: Thanks and the next two chapters are up now if you want to read them!
Title: A Necessary Humiliation 28 Feb 2009 2:36 am
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent - better than excellent! Absolutely brilliant!

    Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much!
Title: A Necessary Humiliation 27 Feb 2009 3:52 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome! Loved this chapter :D

    Both Snape and Dumbledore were brilliant, and let's not forget Silver! They really gave that bastard what he deserved and the professors were very creative in their punishments. He really got what was comming to him!

    I'm glad that Throckmorton is away from the students, and that Holly was saved from him as well. That must have scared Severus half to death, seeing his daughter in the clutches of that creep. But as you said, though one problem has been dealt with, they’ll still have to keep a careful eye out for Lucius.

    BTW, I have to say Throckmorton's middle name truly suits his character, for Hitler was just as twisted in his belief's. Also, I'm now wondering if that hawk was either an aimagus or sent there deliberately...? If not, and he truly was eaten, well I just can't muster up any sympathy *shug* ;p

    P.S. I'll try to check out that other story of your's, soon as I have the opertunity :)

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he did and I loved giving that awful man what he deserved! It was very satisfying to let Sev, Albus, and Silver nail Throckie's arse. 

    Yes, Severus was very scared that Holly would be hurt or killed, so thank goodness Silver was there.  yes, Lucius is still there.

    I'm glad you noticed Throckmorton's middle name, yes, I did that on purpose, and the parallels are unmistakable. 

    The hawk . . .you'll find out about it soon, in a chapter or two.

    Thanks, please do!

Title: A Necessary Humiliation 26 Feb 2009 11:22 pm
Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked it!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: A Necessary Humiliation 26 Feb 2009 7:51 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes!! Throckie got his arse whipped by Sev! That was very satisfying!

    Poor Holly. She must have been terrified! I had actually thought that the stomach flu was caused by something that Throckie had done; like a curse or something.

    There will always be evil out there, no matter that you get rid of one bad egg, there will always be another to replace it.

    Vanishing notes? :o Interesting. Can't wait to see what that's all about.

    Author's Response:

    Wasn't it though? I loved writing that scene! 

    I felt so bad doing that to poor Holly though.  No, the stomach flu was just that a regular stomach flu.

    Yes, there will always be another evil person to come and take their place.

     

    I should have the next one up soon.

Title: When the Falcon Hunts 26 Feb 2009 7:43 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hang him up by his toes!!! What an evil man! OOOOH, he makes me angry!

    I loved the part where Holly kissed Sev and sits on his lap, and Sev's uncomfortable reaction. That was so cute. He'd better get used to displays of affection it seems, musn't he? LOL!

    On to the next chapter, and I hope Sev gives it to the idiot, good!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I know he makes me angry too!

    Severus will indeed have to get used to being hugged and kissed, LOL! He will too, he just wasn't expecting it. 

    Severus will give it to the idiot , don't worry!

Title: A Necessary Humiliation 25 Feb 2009 9:46 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes1 Finally that you-know-what got what was coming to him! Great duel, and everything. Way to go Severus and Albus! And Silver.

    Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you liked it! I wanted everyone to get a piece of him.

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