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Title: A Necessary Humiliation 25 Feb 2009 8:39 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    That was so good, but I thought Dumbledore would have taken away his magic (since he swore on his wand) and left him a squib. Was the hawk Malfoy?
    Good story

    Author's Response: Well, you can't really take away an adult wizard's magic, but he did have  him get killed . . .or did he? I'll leave you to guess.  As for the hawk . . .you'll see.
Title: A Necessary Humiliation 25 Feb 2009 7:12 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! especially the fact that Silver helped and Snape put him in his place good! But . . .is he really gone? I hope so!

    Author's Response: That's the $24,000 Question, now isn't it?  I loved it too, Throckie deserved every minute of it.
Title: A Necessary Humiliation 25 Feb 2009 4:13 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Let me guess, that rat bastard (forgive the pun) Lucius was the hawk.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Uh, you'll find out soon! Thanks!
Title: When the Falcon Hunts 24 Feb 2009 3:36 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I do! great chapter, loved severus and the way he gathered all the dirt on Throckmorton.

    Author's Response: Thanks and I'm working on the next one, I should hopefully have it posted soon!
Title: When the Falcon Hunts 24 Feb 2009 12:08 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    The Spy Eyes were great!

    And please please let Snape fight Throckie, publically beating the spit out of him will be plenty of humiliating specially since Sev's a half-blood.

    Author's Response: Ooo, now that's a good idea, thanks! Glad you liked my Spy Eyes.
Title: When the Falcon Hunts 22 Feb 2009 4:54 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooo, suspense! WHO has come there??? is it related to the 'flu ?

    Author's Response: Uh, no, but it's related some other people in the castle, you'll discover who eventually.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: When the Falcon Hunts 21 Feb 2009 10:31 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm, does Throck have something to do with these illnesses too, perhaps?

    It really is quite sickening what he’s doing in those so called 'classes' of his, and that he's recruiting students into Voldemort supporters. Sick, just plain sick. I'm glad Severus is gathering this information, and the spy eyes are quite handy.

    I can't wait until the creep is exposed! As for public humiliation, I'm sure those Weasley twins would be very helpful :) He should be put under charges of child abuse for what he puts some of those students through too, and when Dumbledore finds out about all his vile actions, Throckie will WISH he was sent to Azkaban ;)

    Author's Response:

    No, but that's an interesting theory.  The flu is just that, a stomach flu, I put it in there because I wanted to show Severus dealing with some common child-related ailments as a father. 

    Yes, Throckie is a very nasty piece of work, he's based on some of the really nasty racists in history. 

    he will be brought up on charges and Severus will be able to get some revenge from all the insults he's been forced to endure and well . . .i don't want to spoil the next chapter.  Dumbledore is going to very PO'd believe me!

Title: When the Falcon Hunts 20 Feb 2009 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Zarathustra (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Lemmee guess, Throckie (Love that, BTW) is working for Lucky Lucie. I love the spy eyes... - but F & G in Advanced Potions? They would only have been second years... I know, I'm picky. It's my lot in life.

    I was beginning to think Throckie had set loose a virus in the school...

    Author's Response:

    Well . . .you're on the right track.  I've got a few other unflattering names for him that I'll use next chapter, LOL!

    As for Fred and George in Advanced Potions . . .it's not like the seventh year NEWTS, it's Severus's extra tutoring that makes them advanced, but I'll reveal more about that later.

    No, Throckie had nothing to do with the virus . . .vile man!

Title: When the Falcon Hunts 20 Feb 2009 11:24 pm
Reviewer: harryphila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi,
    the students as spies were a great idea, but I really loved the Spy Eyes!!! the "they have come here" refers to Narcissa and Draco, right? That means his correspondant is L. Malfoy. Well, I want him sacked AND publically humiliated. You could have him try something against Secerus' children when he finds out he's sacked and then have them duell - I'm sure Severus can come up with several really nice curses...
    So, please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, glad you liked them, I wanted to give Sev some cool magic item to use against the wicked Throckmorton.  As for who the letter referred to and who it was sent to . . .I can't reveal if you're right yet, but you'll see in another few chapters. 

    I agree, Severus should get a chance to duel the scum and he will, trust me!

    Thanks for reading and keep checking, i should have the next chapter up shortly, hoefully by tonight!

Title: When the Falcon Hunts 20 Feb 2009 7:36 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, you really gave me a sense of foreboding about what that excuse for a teacher is up to.....As for Throckie....public humiliation followed by Sev opening up a can of Whoop-a** would be my choice.

    Author's Response: Oh yes, I agree! And there will definately be some of that coming up, believe me!  He's going down!

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