Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 2 11 Jun 2011 9:17 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    the dursely's must die. this is just horrible!
Title: Chapter 2 05 Jan 2009 9:49 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    This looks like it will be a hard case. Hopefully, everyone on staff will be able to help. I like your story so far, though I think it would be better if you either got a beta or did a read-through yourself before you post. I've seen a few verb tense problems in the last two chapters that are minor mistakes, but the story would be better without them. I love the story--keep up the good work!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I can't find anyone to beta for me though.

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