| Title: Chapter 6
| 17 Jan 2009 2:07 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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I'm so glad Harry is getting better. I guess getting Chritmas presents did him a world of good. And he is already a seeker... I wonder if he will be sorted in Slytherin (Severus certainly thinks so, but, if he grows up in a good environnement, he could end up with even more Gryffindor qualities).
| Title: Chapter 6
| 17 Jan 2009 11:40 am
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| Reviewer: toast (Anonymous)
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awwww! lol that is so adorable! Sev is such a proud father
I really liked the Christmas scene and how Harry screamed in excitement, then cried because the presents said Harry instead of Freak. That was cute. I have one suggestion for your story though: I think this story would be better if you slowed it down a little. We went through quite a few months in this one chapter and didn't even get to see how Harry reacted to Lupin when he first became his tutor. These are obstacles that I know I'd like to read about and see him struggle and accept the situation. I understand if you don't though because you may not want to write a long story and I get that. I can't wait to read about the mayhem that Harry will surely cause on his broom.
-P.G.
Author's Response: Lol I guess I can't win either way. People want me to age him and people don't. So I wanted to write a Christmas scene before I aged him.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 09 Jan 2009 12:45 pm
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| Reviewer: shan (Anonymous)
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hey! loved the prequel! :) would love to read more soon! and i really hope that harry doesn't suffer a relapse once he learns of his past.. update soon!
oooo this is great! i love how Sev interacts with him!
Awww I was smiling so much when Harry said his full name!
Great chapter. I'm glad Harry is saying his name a bit, at least for now. I think Sev is going to have to become more open with hugging and showing affection though or Harry is going to get the wrong idea about him sooner or later. Also, I'm a little worried about what could happen with him and the older students. For now though, I'm glad that he's doing better.
-P.G.
| Title: Chapter 5
| 08 Jan 2009 7:57 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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Yes! Harry finally said his name. Hurrah for Severus, he hed a brilliant idea.
I don't think Dumbledore's fears are grounded : Harry is just 5 and, between Severus, Minerva and Pomfrey, I can't see him growing up spoiled...
| Title: Chapter 4
| 07 Jan 2009 6:45 am
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| Reviewer: maha q8 (Anonymous)
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oh what agreat sad story i can't wait for more of severus and harry
please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Aw poor Harry! what an awful time he has had, I cant believe he actually thinks his name is freak, the Dursleys totally deserve life in Azkaban! : )
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, they definitely deserve what they got.
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