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Reviews For Torn Apart World
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Author's Response: Aww, thank YOU so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you like =) Regards, Shoon
"Ut vos vulnero, sic vadum vos vulnero. Forever sentio suus poena." ... "Forever?" I think that slipped by your beta :) Author's Response: Actually, after much internet research I was unable to find a direct Latin translation for the word 'forever', so no, it was not something that either myself or my beta missed. I suppose I could have changed it to something like 'prolix' but I wanted to communicate the longjevity of the spell, so I left it as the english word, and there was no way I was going to explain that in the heat of the moment of that scene. =) I suppose it will just have to be one of those things that readers with such an attention to detail as yourself will catch and wonder about. If indeed there is a Latin word that means 'forever' I would be happy to change it, but I checked several sites and found nothing, and wasn't worried about spending hours trying to find it. Good catch though! I hope it didnt make too little sense in the scene to detract from the moment. Thanks so much for your review, and for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Regards, Shoon
Author's Response: I'm not sure about a sequel. I honestly don't know how I could torture poor Harry again without severely putting off my readers, and because I pretty much only would write angst, I think it would push people away to see Harry go through something terrible again considering what I've already done to him. I'd love to hear your thoughts on that though. =) Regards, Shoon
Author's Response: Not horrible at all! I adore wild, vengeful Snape =p And thank YOU for all the lovely reviews! Regards, Shoon
Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Thanks so much for reading. Regards, Shoon |
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