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Title: Some Kind of Revenge 12 Feb 2011 12:48 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for the update--still love this story. I just take the "lag time" between chapters as a wonderful excuse to go back and read my favorite parts again.

    V.
Title: Some Kind of Revenge 08 Feb 2011 5:31 am
Reviewer: A. (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great to see this story pop up again! Sad that it's ending, but I think it's a good spot to wrap it up. Now that the angst is over! ;)
Title: Some Kind of Revenge 07 Feb 2011 11:21 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter you are so sensitive to their needs and to the demons that drive them thank you so much

    Author's Response:

    Aww, thank YOU so much.  I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know what you like =)

    Regards,

    Shoon

Title: Some Kind of Revenge 07 Feb 2011 1:54 pm
Reviewer: a37 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad to see this story back.

    "Ut vos vulnero, sic vadum vos vulnero. Forever sentio suus poena."
    ... "Forever?" I think that slipped by your beta :)

    Author's Response:

    Actually, after much internet research I was unable to find a direct Latin translation for the word 'forever', so no, it was not something that either myself or my beta missed.  I suppose I could have changed it to something like 'prolix' but I wanted to communicate the longjevity of the spell, so I left it as the english word, and there was no way I was going to explain that in the heat of the moment of that scene.  =)  I suppose it will just have to be one of those things that readers with such an attention to detail as yourself will catch and wonder about.  If indeed there is a Latin word that means 'forever' I would be happy to change it, but I checked several sites and found nothing, and wasn't worried about spending hours trying to find it.  Good catch though! I hope it didnt make too little sense in the scene to detract from the moment.

    Thanks so much for your review, and for reading.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

    Regards,

    Shoon

Title: Some Kind of Revenge 06 Feb 2011 7:29 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh so satisfying seeing Vernon get what he deserved!! :)
Title: Some Kind of Revenge 06 Feb 2011 7:10 am
Reviewer: SpicyKittins (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! an update! Yay another on coming soon after! I'm a little sad it will be the last chapter though...I really like this story...will you be writing a sequel or starting another story?

    Author's Response:

    I'm not sure about a sequel.  I honestly don't know how I could torture poor Harry again without severely putting off my readers, and because I pretty much only would write angst, I think it would push people away to see Harry go through something terrible again considering what I've already done to him.  I'd love to hear your thoughts on that though. =)

    Regards,

    Shoon

Title: Some Kind of Revenge 06 Feb 2011 6:19 am
Reviewer: angeleye68 (Signed) [Report This]
    Is it horrible to say I love revenge? Loved this chapter. I am so happy that I am now caught up. Looking forward to the next update. Thanks!

    Author's Response:

    Not horrible at all!  I adore wild, vengeful Snape =p  And thank YOU for all the lovely reviews!

    Regards,

    Shoon

     

     

Title: Some Kind of Revenge 06 Feb 2011 1:20 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes!!!!!!!!! I love this story soooooooo much!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

    Author's Response: Yay!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks so much for reading.  Regards, Shoon

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