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Reviews For Torn Apart World
Title: First Time for Everything 11 Jan 2009 10:54 am
Reviewer: Howling_inthe_dark (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was sweet.
    I have deffently been enjoying the story so far. The emotion feels real for the situations.
    Just wanted to let you know that this has been very good and I have enjoyed it so far, I cant wait to keep reading!
Title: First Time for Everything 10 Jan 2009 6:04 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape admitting to something that vaguely sounds like affection? That is quite interesting.

    -P.G.
Title: First Time for Everything 10 Jan 2009 5:52 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Don't let anyone put you down about this story!

    I started reading it an hour ago and I truly love it. One of my favourites. I love highly original and Alternate Universe stories. I hate it when Snape remains in character and treats Harry like a git. Your Severus Snape is believable if a little rough on the outside. The only thing I didn't like was when you mentioned that most Slytherins were abused; I believe they'd be treated better due to their 'pureblood'.

    Other than that little tidbit for me, I extremly enjoy this story.

    Keep writing. Keep smiling. And keep updating.

    Yours,
    Lady Julie Snape.

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