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Reviews For Torn Apart World
I have deffently been enjoying the story so far. The emotion feels real for the situations. Just wanted to let you know that this has been very good and I have enjoyed it so far, I cant wait to keep reading!
-P.G.
I started reading it an hour ago and I truly love it. One of my favourites. I love highly original and Alternate Universe stories. I hate it when Snape remains in character and treats Harry like a git. Your Severus Snape is believable if a little rough on the outside. The only thing I didn't like was when you mentioned that most Slytherins were abused; I believe they'd be treated better due to their 'pureblood'. Other than that little tidbit for me, I extremly enjoy this story. Keep writing. Keep smiling. And keep updating. Yours, Lady Julie Snape. |
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